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TheCorruptionofPower

TheManorFarmrunssmoothly,amodelagriculturaloperation.Theanimalspulltheir
loadsandfileintomeetings,thewindmillchoppingsteadilyinthebreeze.Atacloserglance,
theireyeshavedulledandtheirmovementsaremechanized.RevolutionbeganwiththepigOld
Majorsprophecy
of the golden future time
(Orwell9).CrueltybythehandofManwouldbe
toleratednomore.AnimalsintimidatedManwithfierceideals,takingthepowerforthemselves.
Thepigssprangupastheobviousleadersinalltheothersunknowingelation.Theysetupseven
CommandmentsastoneverleadManslife.However,eachedictalteredincrementallyasto
becomeunrecognizable.Eachslightchangewasasteptowardstheenemy,andintheend,they
becameoneandthesame.
SevenCommandmentsmarkedthefundamentalprinciplesofthefarmsnewlyadopted
Animalism:1.Whatevergoesupontwolegsisanenemy.2.Whatevergoesuponfourlegs,or
haswings,isafriend.3.Noanimalshallwearclothes.4.Noanimalshallsleepinabed.5.No
animalshalldrinkalcohol.6.Noanimalshallkillanyotheranimal.7.Allanimalsareequal
(Orwell21).Theanimalsfollowedeach,toapoint.Thepigsneverviolatedthem,thoughtheir
actionsshouldhaveexecutedthem.Therules,constantlypaintedoverbydishonestSquealer,
amountedtohiscorruptionbypower.Napoleonsalreadyhighspotonthefarmstotempole
gavehimtheupperhandinmanipulatingtheothersintoreverence.ChasingawaySnowballwas
histrumpcard,shiftingtheenemyfromMantotheformercoleaderofthefarm.The
CommandmentswereestablishedforthesolereasonofneverbecomingMan,thoughthepigs
stoodinJonessfineclothinganddranktotheenemy.
Buildingawindmillwasanexcellentsolutiontotheproblemofincreasingmanpower.It
wasaprojectinvolvingeveryoneandtoshowthefarmersoutsidehowwelltheirindependence
wasfaring.Ofcourse,sinceitwasSnowballsideaNapoleonhadtodisagreeforthesakeof
seemingbetter.Theirtwocampaignswereessentiallyaqueryofworknoworworklater?The
pigsunderlyingmotivewouldalwaysbeaimedtowardsgainingcontrol.Snowballsproposal
madesenseandthepigwouldhavetobedeposedinordertogiveNapoleontheimageofahero.
Insteadofthedictatorshipoftheproletariat,thefarmevolvedintothedictatorshipof
theautocrat.OldMajorsdreamofatimeofpeaceandprosperitybecamesotwisted,pitting
animalagainstanimalwithoutanyofthemnoticing.OfcoursethefarmersoutsidelikeFrederick
andPilkingtontooknote,butitwasamicableacknowledgementandbusinessasusualwith
Napoleonincharge,goingsofarastohaveadrinkandagameofcards.Thecitizensthemselves
werepeltedwithfactsandfigures,evenafterBoxerwassenttohisdeath.Allthoughtsof
anotherrevoltweresuppressedbythechangingdetailshereandthereuntilhistorycouldnever
repeatagain.
ThemindsoftheanimalswereawashinthelightofNapoleonsrule.TheManorFarm
stoodashiningexampleofwhateveryotherfarmwouldstrivetobe.However,theirminds
slowly,subtlyshiftedineverycelltoaccepttheirgodlikeleader.Inreality,lifewascrueland

theyworkedtothebone,tiredbutilliterateandsatisfied.EachdaywasheraldedbySquealers
enormousgushofwords,asteadyflowofmorphinepulsingintheveinsoftheweary.The
animalsbaskedinthegloryoffreedom,thoughitwastheshadowofcommunismshrouding
themindarkness.

SelfEvaluation
My
AnimalFarm
essayshouldreceiveathreeorafour(instrictaccordancewiththe
rubric).Thestatementsmadeweremeanttobethoughtprovokinglyvague,thoughinactuality
couldhavebeenmuchmorespecific.Theessayanalyzedoftheamalgamofwordsthoroughly
enoughastoriseabovemediocrity.Onemetaphoroftheconcludingparagraphwasstatedtobe
...incredible!!!byafellowclassmate.Theparagraphseemedlikeanarrative,butwasphrased
thiswaytobeauniversal
AnimalFarm
conclusion.Thereseemedtobetwotopicsinthisessay,
onedealingwithcorruptionandtheotherwiththepoliticalmindshiftingintheeffect.They
intertwine,yes,howevertheintroductoryparagraphmakesapointaboutthementalrotofpower
andtheendshowsthesugarcoatingoffailedcommunism.Insomeeditingthisessaydealing
withthecorruptionoftheselfcanbeexpandedtocorruptioninasocietytoevenoutthestrange
alterationofsubjectmatter.
Theessaywasnotpoorlywritten,showseffortandtime,howeverstillseemstobeinthe
editorialprocessinregardstostructureandorganization.4/8(personallyIwouldfeelbetterwith
a6ora7)

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