I improved immensely this year with my writing.

On my
second essay about human rights, I was able to use my
thesis to connect all of ideas. On my third essay about the
Kite Runner, I closed out my paragraphs with great
transitions. This allowed for a clearer essay. In my final
essay about Macbeth, I focused on explaining my quotes
with more detail. I accomplished this and it allowed my
paper to be much richer. Overall, I met all the goals I was
hoping to meet and am proud of how much progress my
writing has made this year.