Mrs.

Cracchiolo (2014-2015)
PIECE OF WRITING : Oedipus Essay
In class writing OR out of class writing
1. Looking at the feedback, what/where do you think you did particularly well?
I think I did really well in the organization of my body paragraphs.

2. Looking at the feedback, what do you think was the area you need the most
improvement in and why? (Be Specific)
I need to improve on the clarity of my thesis and topic sentences because they were
unclear and I could be more specific on them

3. Did the loop cycle work for you? Why or why not?
Yes, because it helped organize the order of my body paragraphs.

4. The big question: based on your comments, checklist where you rated yourself on body
paragraph structure, and overall score, what NEW GOAL do you have for your next
writing assignment? In other words, what skills will you try to focus on in the future and
why?
GOAL:
To write more clear and specific thesis and topic statements

WHY:
With out it, my paper doesnt have very good flow.