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Ijwbapeeredit 2
Ijwbapeeredit 2
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PAPER DESCRIPTION:
WRITING GENRE: Explanatory
WRITING STAGE: Draft #2
Qusetions About Titles
No
Somewhat
Yes
Comments/Suggestion
s
Good title that
about?
No
Somewhat
Yes
Comments/Suggestion
s
Somewhat
Yes
Comments/Suggestion
s
Paragraphs could be
included?
detail.
Good attempt at
using examples?
More information
could actually
No
Somewhat
Yes
Comments/Suggestion
s
says
too often?
Are there any sentences too
says
choppy?
Has the writer paragraphed
sentence variety.
Good grouping of
ideas
No
Somewhat
Yes
Comments/Suggestion
s
it?
Does the reader feel something
together.
Overall Strength(s):
Good title
Good ideas
Good contrast between the two authors
Overall Weakness(es):
Sentence structure variety lacking
Repetition of a few words
Ideas not fully developed