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Rhetoricalanalysispaperdraft 1 Peeredit 1
Rhetoricalanalysispaperdraft 1 Peeredit 1
Rhetoricalanalysispaperdraft 1 Peeredit 1
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WRITING STAGE: Draft #1
Qusetions About Titles
Does title fist what the piece is
about?
Is title a grabber? Does it make a
reader want to read the piece?
Questions About Leads
Does the lead bring the reader right
No
Somewhat
Yes
Comments/Suggestions
Somewhat
Yes
Comments/Suggestions
Yes
Comments/Suggestions
No
No
using examples?
Are thoughts and feelings told at
Somewhat
Could be more
descriptive
12
information
No
Somewhat
Yes
Comments/Suggestions
change it up some
Some are too brief
No
Somewhat
Yes
Comments/Suggestions
Overall Strength(s):
Comparison between ads
Overall Weakness(es):
Lacking sentence variation
Short and choppy sentences
Not very descriptive