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The state of Italy was wretched after World War I so
they now need someone to help them rise again on their feet from falling apart.
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What was the state of Italy prior to

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What was the state of Italy before the rise of Mussolini? The state of Italy was in
poverty for they have nothing since they have lost in the war.

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Box 1 EV1: APPROVED By 1918, the country

was hit by very high inflation and unemployment
was high. But at least Italy had been on the
winning side and could expect her just rewards at
Versailles.........
In fact, Italy got very little at Versailles. The Italian
public believed that her leaders there had been
humiliated as the "Big Three" (Wilson of America,
Lloyd George of Britain and Clemenceau of
France) all but ignored the Italian delegation .
who were seen as secondary figures at
Versailles. This heaped further humiliation on the
government.
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Italy is at beginning to have a

depression
The leaders and the government of Italy
are humiliated.
Italy went to war to restore and gain
power.
The people saw Mussolini as a better
leader than the king.

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Based on the aftermath of World War I, Italy is on

the edged of having a depression for they have
lost to restore and gain power for their country.The
government of the country along of their leaders
were humiliated for they made decided to make
Italy go into war. This result lead to high
unemployment and inflation in Italy. The king
assign Mussolini as Prime Minister to help resolve
from any more conflict. The people then sees
Mussolini as a new hope to restore Italy once
again.*

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By 1918, the country was

hit by very high inflation and
unemployment was high.
..[Italy] was hit by very..[to
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unemployment was high.

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The state of Italy was wretched after World War I had ended, so they now need someone to help them rise again
on their feet from falling apart. Italy was very close of having a depression for they have aborted to gain the
power for their country. The government of the country along with their leaders were humiliated, for they decided
to make Italy go into war. This result led ...[Italy to have]... high inflation and unemployment(Trueman,1).

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Italy needed a resolution quickly; otherwise, they would be stuck living their lives in the dirt without any hope of restoring their country.
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Box 2 EV2: APPROVED Furthermore, the war

destabilized Italian politics and devastated the
economy, just as it disrupted life throughout
Europe. Economic suffering and unfulfilled
expectations in turn fueled political instability,
which tested the very roots of the constitutional
system. In the midst of spreading malaise and
violence, Italian revolutionary socialists
entertained a Soviet-style revolution. In reaction,
a new, militant movement appeared, dispensing
intimidation and violent retribution primarily
against socialists while employing symbolism
and rhetoric that they called Fascist.

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World War I is affecting the politics of

Italy
The economy of Italy is suffering
drastically as well the expectations were
frustrating
The Italian socialists were in a
revolution to get attention by showing discomfort
and violence
The reaction to this the military came
using coercion to the socialists which seems to
be Fascist.

The war have been affecting the politics of Italy as

for the economy was suffering drastically. The
expectations of restoring Italy was frustrating. The
Italian socialists began to rise to gain attention by
showing discomfort and violence to earn power.
The military wasnt satisfied with this for [they]
appeared, dispensing intimidation and violent
retribution against [the] socialists... [representing
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violent retribution primarily
against socialists while
employing symbolism and
rhetoric that they called
{representing} Fascist.

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[representing as]
Fascist

The war have been affecting the politics of Italy as for the economy
was suffering drastically. The expectations of restoring Italy was
frustrating. The Italian socialists began to rise to gain attention by
showing discomfort and violence to earn power. The military wasnt
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violent retribution against [the] socialists... [representing as] Fascist
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World War I had affected the politics of Italy and as for the economy, it was suffering drastically. The people were
frustrated for their expectations of restoring Italy didnt go so well because there was no leader to fix this problem.
Since there was no one to lead the nation, this was the opportunity for someone to strike and grab the power to
control the country. The Italian socialists started to rise because they wanted to get power. In order to get the
attention of others, they use discomfort and violence to gain what they desired. The military wasnt satisfied with
this for [they] appeared, dispensing intimidation and violent retribution against [the] socialists [representing
as] Fascist[s] (Killinger,2 pg.30).
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How did Mussolini gain support of

the people?
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APPROVED The working class population had

been fighting for many years against the poor
working conditions and lack of motivation and
need for fulfilling their physiological needs such
as food, shelter and water. In order to gain the
support of the Working Class population,
Mussolini used a method of suppression to break
up the strikes and riots formed by the Working
Class population using members of the
Squadristi a gang made up of ex-army

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While making his progress of ruling Italy, Mussolini needed support from his people to get
the power to control the country.

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The population is fighting with the poor

conditions of living.
Mussolini finds a better way to help the
country so he breaks up strikes and more
Mussolini begins to gain support

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Mussolini[s] used a method

of suppression [was] to break
up the strikes and riots

legionaries. He later on then decided to form a

Liberal Agenda in which he granted concessions
such as a minimum wage, better working
conditions and working time conditions. The
Working Class population agreed and parted on
his side of Fascism, thus increasing his
popularity.
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Citation: Gajjar

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Mussolini[s] method of
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The population of Italy was fighting with the poor

condition of survival and the lack of motivating to find the
necessities of life. Mussolini needed to search a way to
put everything back into place; as a result, Mussolini
then sees a better way to solve this conflict. Mussolinis
method of suppression is to break up the strikes and
riots. (Gajjar) to gain the reinforcement of the working
class population. Then he forms a group for the people
to have better working conditions and more to survive
better in Italy. The support of Mussolini was gradually
increasing for the population agrees in his point of view.

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Mussolini needed support from his people to get the power to control the country. The population of Italy was in
terrible condition after World War I. They were fighting with the poor conditions of survival and the lack of
motivation to find the necessities of life. He needed a way to restore everything back into place; he, as a result,
saw a better way to resolve this conflict. Mussolinis method of suppression [was] to break up the strikes and
riots (Gajjar,19), to gain the reinforcement of the working class population. He forms an organization for the
society to have improved working conditions to survive better in Italy without any conflict. The support of this new
leader was gradually increasing; therefore, the population agrees in his point of view.
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Mussolini is still striving to find the rise of power to rule Italy, so he strives to make Italy better than it was in the past by improving their
conditions of the country.

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Supporters distinguish themselves by wearing

black shirts and by their nationalistic, anti liberal
and anti socialist ideals. Working in squads they
haunt the countryside, persecuting socialists and
unionists, breaking up strikes, burning down
union and Socialist Party offices and intimidating
local governments.
By late 1921 the fascists control large parts of
rural Italy. Mussolini uses his charisma and talent
at public speaking to popularise the movement as
the bastion of Italian nationalism and a bulkhead
against the communist "threat". He receives
support from landowners and the urban middleclass.
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Citation: Harris
The people are gather together to join as one
team to work for Mussolini since they see him as
well leader to lead their nation. So in order to
support him, the citizens made a league to give
and show that Mussolini deserves the power he
needs to make their country better. They saw him
as their idol and later in the future, Mussolini got
what he deserved from the help of the people for
Italy is now powerful.
Mussolini had to foster good relations with the
Roman Catholic Church simply because,
regardless of his dictatorship, the Roman Catholic
Church was such a powerful institution in Italy.
While Mussolini governed the political side of
Italy, the Roman Catholic Church governed the
spiritual side. In this sense, Mussolini could not
afford to anger the Roman Catholic Church.

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Mussolinis supporters would cooperate

with him to get some jobs done.
Mussolini would use his skills to
persuade others to join him.
He needed to have a good relationship
with the church for it is a powerful institution

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In order to obtain more supporters, Mussolini needed to

create a league for the people to join and why.
Therefore Mussolini uses his [intelligence] public
speaking to popularise the movement ( Harris) to
gain support from the people who agrees with his
ideas.Then the group would cooperate with him to make
others vote for him as well. Although Mussolini already
have supporters, he needed the Roman Catholic
Churchs support in order to be superior for it was a
powerful institution in Italy.

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Mussolini uses his charisma

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Citation:Trueman

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In arrangement to retrieved numerous supporters, Mussolini was required to create a league for the community to join and
why. Therefore, Mussolini [used] his [intelligence] public speaking to popularise the movement (Harris,7), to gain
support from the public who agreed with his views. Then the group cooperated with him to make others vote for him as well.

Although Mussolini already have supporters, he needed the Roman Catholic Churchs support in order to be superior for it
was the powerful institution in Italy.

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How did Mussolini solidify power?

In order for Italy to be restore, they needed a capable commander to hold the power of their
country.
Mussolini was here for the job to restore Italy and from that results, he have work his best in
order to strengthen his power.

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APPROVED The Fascist circus was growing,

and it toured the country in convoys of trucks
furnished by the industrials, stopping now and
then to beat up Socialists while the local police
playing cards. The Fascist grew rapidly, a kind of
counter-revolutionary Ku KLux Klan made up of
eager middle- and upper-class youth who
enjoyed terrorizing the workers-- who in their turn
had been knocking upper-class mothers hat off
in the streets and throwing upper-class fathers
out of their first class carriages. No distinctions
were being made by the Fascisti between
Socialists, Communists, and republicans; all were
treated as dangerous Reds. The process, of
course, was cumulative. Against Mussolinis
black-shirted Arditi del Popolo (Peoples Shock
Troops). Murder and arson were daily
occurrences, and by midsummer, 1922, the
Socialists were driven to transportation. The
government was helpless to combat the effects.
The government was helpless to combat the
effects. Italy was paralyzed and needed a savior.
Mussolini, more commonly called il Duce (the
Leader) from this time on, was not found lacking.
He gave the government forty-eight hours to act,
and at the expiration of that time he had his
Fascists take over public transportation.
Suddenly Mussolini was the only force for law
and order led in Italy. He began to talk of
governing the country, and on October 21
proclaimed, It is time for the arrow to leave the
bow.This was a poetic reference to a proposed
Fascist march on Rome. The king, imagining a
hundred thousand Blackshirts slogging down the
old Roman roads to the holy city, called on
Mussolini to come for a visit. On October 28,
1922, the new Caesar boarded the Rome-bound
express in Milan, with a last reminder to his
followers to burn down the offices of Avant. They
would be burnt for the fourth and last time.
Caesar was on his way, and from then on the
Italian railroad would run on time.

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The fascists had grew more in the country.

Mussolini have supporters that wear black shirts

Mussolini would not rest until he have power

He and the fascists would go to March on Rome

to prove they are strong to be an official party

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The fascists had grew more in Italy and it is getting out of hand.
Mussolini also had his own fascist group, Arditi del Popolo who
supported him to give him power. Mussolini did not rest for he work
many hours in the government to get what was his. Mussolini and his
Fascist Party went to have a march on Rome to prove they are worthy
to be an official party for Italy. Based on that day, Mussolini was
considered the new Caesar for Italy.

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Mussolini was the only force

for... law and order led in Italy.
He began to talk of governing
the country, and on October
21 {he} proclaimed{.},It is
time for the arrow to leave the
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Citation: Forman, pg#.28
The 1922 March on Rome was to establish
Mussolini and the Fascist Party he led, as the
most important political party in Italy. In
November 1921, the fascist parties of Italy joined
forces to create the Fascist Party. It became an
official political party. In its October 1922 party
conference, Mussolini said: Either the
government will be given to us or will shall seize it
by marching on Rome.
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Citation: Harris
Mussolini, with the partys hierarchy, drew up a
blueprint on how to do this. Fascists would be
brought into Rome from all over Italy. Allimportant public buildings would be taken over
including those outside of Rome in the important
cities in the north. Mussolini would demand the
resignation of the government and that a new
Fascist government be allowed to take over.
Armed Fascists would be near Rome. If the
government failed to meet these demands, they
would march into Rome and take over by the use
of force.
The plan was grandiose if nave. The military in
Rome far out-numbered the Fascists who were
poorly armed. Many Fascists only had tools
brought with them from farms. Many had the
wrong clothing for a party that was trying to seize
power.
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Citation: Trueman

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In order for Italy to be restored, they needed a capable commander to hold the power of their country. The
socialists had grown more in Italy and it was getting out of hand. The government needed a savior and Mussolini
was the solution to save Italy from their misery, therefore he went to try to become the new leader of Italy. The
people believed the government was not going so well; accordingly, Mussolini was the only force for
governing and on October 21[,] [he] proclaimed[.] (Forman,12 pg28). Mussolini did not rest for he worked
many hours in the government to get what was his. Mussolini and his Fascist Party went to have a march on
Rome to prove they are worthy to be an official party for Italy. Based on that day, Mussolini was considered the
new caesar for Italy.
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APPROVED
However, Mussolini gambled on one thing. He
believed that the Italian government lead by
Facta and the king, Victor Emmanuel, did not
want any form of conflict especially as Italy had
suffered so much in World War One. Mussolini
miscalculated with Facta he wanted to make a
firm stand against Mussolini. But Mussolini was
correct with regards to the king. Victor Emmanuel
was convinced that any form of conflict would
lead to a civil war and he was not willing to
contemplate that.
Victor Emmanuel also knew that his cousin, the
Duke of Aosta, was a Fascist supporter. He was
fearful that his cousin would replace him if he
stood up to Mussolini and failed

On October 29th, 1922, Mussolini was

summoned to meet the king in Rome.Mussolini
arrived on October 30th and was sworn in as
Prime Minister. Only then were the Fascists who
had gathered outside of Rome allowed to march
in triumph through Rome. Just five years earlier,
Mussolini had been a corporal in the Italian Army
fighting in World War One.
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Citation: trueman

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Italy had suffered so much

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Mussolini became a prime minister

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[Mussolini] believed that the Italian government had suffered so

much in World onE (Trueman), so he needed to retrieve the
attention with leaders that hold superior power. Mussolini was able
to convinced the king that Italy was in terrible danger and that any
conflict would bring a civil war. Unlike Facta, he was against
Mussolini for he had miscalculated with him while discussing. The
king was frightened that he would be replaced by his own cousin, if
he failed to stood up to Mussolini and he doesnt want to deal with
any more conflicts. The king summoned Mussolini to be a Prime
Minister that would allow him to the March on Rome.

He{ Mussolini} ... believed that

the Italian government... lead
by Facta and the king, Victor
Emmanuel, did not want any
form of conflict especially as
Italy had suffered so much in
World War One

[Mussolini] believed
that the Italian
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suffered so much in
World War one.

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From Mussolinis point of view of the government, [Mussolini] believed that the Italian government had suffered
so much in World War one (Trueman,5). He tried to gather the government leaders to explain thoroughly why to
keep Italy safe. He managed to convince the king that any conflict would lead to greater consequences like a civil
war. The king was not willing to have that happen to Italy; therefore, he summoned Mussolini to meet him in
Rome to be the new Prime Minister. This allowed Mussolini to have the March of Rome to solidify more of his new
power.

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Although he earned his power, he needed to keep everything under control to prevent any
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How did Mussolini improve the

economy?

Italy and him went through three battles to improve their economy from despair.

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APPROVED Mussolini knew that Italy after 1918

was a poor nation compared to France and
Britain. Mussolini wanted to advance the
economic state of Italy and his plan was based on
a two-fold approach: attacking the power of the
trade unions and therefore controlling the
workers, and setting Italy targets as he ha with his
Battle for Births. For the attempt to get Italy on the
road to economic prosperity, Mussolini introduced
three battles- the Battle for Land, the Battle of
the Lira and the Battle for Grain.
The Battle for Land: This 'battle' was to clear
marshland and make it useable for farming and
other purposes. One area that was cleared was
the Pontine Marshes - an area of mosquitoinfested bog land that was to have housing built
on it. Cleared land also had roads built on them to
improve Italy's infrastructure. These schemes
were labour intensive and employed a lot of
people so they served a purpose in this area.
Many saw the Battle of Land as a success.

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Italy was in poverty and Mussolini wants to

restore it

His plan is to attack the union trade to control

some workers.

He then made three battles to improve the

economy like the battle of land

The battle of land was a success

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Italy was not making any progress to improve their nation.

Mussolini then realized this and made a plan to attack the trade
unions to control some workers to help Italy. While helping Italy, he
made three battles in order to increase their hopes. The three
battles were called the Battle of Land which was believed to
become a success then the Battle of Lira, and finally, Battle of
Grain. The Battle of Land was to make the marshland into an
agricultural field for the people to be employed with purpose for the
economy.

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advance society

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Italy after 1918 was a poor

nation compared to France and
Britain ...{and} Mussolini wanted
to advance the
{economy} ...economic state of
Italy .
Italy was a poor nation.
{and} Mussolini wanted to
advance the {economy}.

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Mussolini was able to maintain Italy by advancing the economy and maintaining the control of the society. Italy
was not making any progress to improve their nation. Italy was a poor nation.[and] Mussolini wanted to
advance the [economy](Trueman,9). Mussolini then realized this and made a plan to attack the trade unions to
control some workers to help Italy. While helping Italy, he made three battles in order to increase their hopes. The
three battles were called the Battle of Land which was believed to become a success then the Battle of Lira, and
finally, Battle of Grain. The Battle of Land was to make the marshland into an agricultural field for the people to be
employed with purpose for the economy.

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APPROVED The Battle of the Lira: This 'battle'

was to restore some of the purchasing power the
lira had in bygone days. Mussolini believed that a
weak lira looked bad for Italy when he was trying
to create the image of a super power in Europe.
A powerful nation could not have a weak national
currency. Mussolini inflated the value of the lira
making exports more expensive. This created
unemployment at home as many industries and
firms could not sell their goods. This particular
battle proved a failure primarily as the economic
base of Italy was too small. She was not an
industrial nation but in essence an agricultural
one. Basing the strength of your economy on
agriculture rarely works and this was the case in
Italy. However, Italy got through the Depression
in the 1930'a better than Europe's industrial
power houses simply because she was an
agricultural nation. The Depression hit the
industrial nations of Europe very hard.
The Battle for Grain: Mussolini wanted to make
Italy economically stronger and near enough selfsufficient. Hence his desire to grow grain.
However, the plan was to grow grain at the
expense of fruit and vegetables which were
cheaper to produce. Italian grain became
expensive at home and the price of bread rose.
This hit the poor the worst as bread was a major
part of their diet. Rich farmers did well out of this
as they were guaranteed a good price for what
they produced.
In terms of economic growth, Italy did not have
the expanse of industry to bolster her farming
based economy. Whereas Germany had its
industrial power-house in the Ruhr and Britain
had South Wales, the North-East, Midlands and
North-West, Italy had relatively few of these
industrial zones. Though laudable in theory,
Mussolini's plans for Italy's economic growth
were based on weaknesses he could not
overcome.
Source #: 9
Citation: Trueman

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reconduct recession

The battle of the Lira was to restore power

Italy was more seen as an agricultural nation

Due to the help of being an agricultural nation,

they survived during the depression.

The battle of grain was to make the economy

stronger by growing grain like bread

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Mussolini's plans for Italy's

economic growth were based on
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could not overcome.

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Another of Mussolinis battles were the Battle of Lira and the Battle
of Grain. The Battle of Lira was to reconduct the power of Italy.
Then it was seen as a failure for Italy does not hold a huge base for
economics Instead of being industrial, they became an agricultural
nation that have also help them succeeded in the depression unlike
the other nations. The Battle of Grain was to make the economy as
well by growing grain suggested by Mussolini. They had troubled at
first then later they were able to adjust this new way to earn
recession.

Mussolinis plans for Italys

economic growth were based on
{their} weaknesses {.} ...

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Another battle to improve the economy was the Battle of Lira and the Battle of Grain. Mussolinis plans for Italys
economic growth were based on [their] weaknesses (Trueman,9). The Battle of Lira was to reconduct the power
of Italy. Later it was seen as a failure, for Italy does not hold a huge base for economics. Instead of being
industrial, they became an agricultural nation that have also helped them succeeded in the depression unlike the
other nations. The Battle of Grain made the economy grew by growing grain to sell them as profit that was
suggested by Mussolini. They had troubled at first, but eventually, they adjusted to this new way to earn
recession.
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did
Mussolini maintain control over the
people/manipulate the people to
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Mussolini was able to control over the people by obtaining their attention on how to fix Italy.

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APPROVED In order for Mussolini to increase his

support alongside the support from political
parties it was exceptionally crucial for him to gain
the support of the most popular institution in Italy,
the Roman Catholic Church. Due to its large
reputation and popularity amongst the people of
Italy, Mussolini had merely used the institution for
his own purposes, his relationship with the
Roman Catholic Church was later described as a
Marriage of Convenience as it was a merely a
tactic which he used to help him boost Fascist
support and more importantly, his own support.
He managed to gain the support of the Catholic
Church by mainly changing his personal
behaviour and portraying himself as a good
Catholic. In 1926 Mussolini renewed his vows in
a Catholic Church to his wife and christened his
children in 1923. This had gained him publicity
and portrayed a positive Catholic image of him in
front of the public therefore gaining support.
Politically however, Mussolini had agreed to give
the Church what it wished. Mussolini had
introduced therefore, a decree which had made
the teaching of religion compulsory in schools
and the introduction of the Lateran Treaties. In
the Lateran Treaties Mussolini handed over 110
acres of land to the Catholic Church to form their
own city, known as the Vatican City, in which the
church was able to create its own laws and run
that small state by itself. The church had been
exceptionally proud and was fully supportive of
Mussolini.

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Mussolini needed to increase his support by

getting the Roman Catholic Church

He managed to get their support by changing his

behaviors

He had to give what the church wanted like

education and land

People helped gain him more support

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The church [was]...had been

exceptionally proud and was fully
supportive of Mussolini.

In order to increase the assistance instead from the political parties,

he needed the most powerful institution, the Roman Catholic Church.
He only required to get the support, but he needed to change his
behavior to be seen as a Catholic. After many deeds of the church,
the public had saw him as a positive image; consequently, he earned
their trust. He earned the churchs trust as well when he agrees to
give what the churches wished for such as more land and education.

The church [was] .

exceptionally proud and was
fully supportive of
Mussolini.

Source #: 19
Citation: Gajjar

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In order to increase the rate of receiving the assistance from the political parties and the population, he needed
the most powerful institution, the Roman Catholic Church. He only required to get the support, but he needed to
change his behavior to be seen as a Catholic.Some deeds he performed to the church was to renewed his vows
in a Catholic Church to his wife and christened his children. He later changed his personal behavior to be viewed
as a good Catholic. After many deeds of the church, the public had saw him as a positive image; consequently,
he earned their trust. He earned the churchs trust as well when he agrees to give what the churches wished for

such as more land and education; furthermore, the church [was] . exceptionally proud and was fully supportive
of Mussolini(Gajjar,19).
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F Transition Sentence Mussolini needed to find a way to restore Italy, so the battles in Italy was the resolution to the economy.

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APPROVED Mussolini had to decide on

whether to take on the power of the Roman
Catholic Church in Italy or to work with it. He
chose the latter. In this way, Italians did not
have to have divided loyalties. Therefore,
Mussolini worked to get the Roman Catholic
Church to accept a Fascist state while he
planned to offer the Roman Catholic Church
what it wanted.

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Mussolini had to make a choice to whether to

take the power from the church or cooperate with it

He decided to work with them

A treaty, Concordat made the church do

something

The agreements were signed and Mussolinis

popularity had rise

Another part of the treaty was called the

Concordat. This made the Roman Catholic
faith the state religion - this was a fait accompli
anyway. The pope appointed his bishops,
though they had to receive the governments
blessing. Religion had to be taught in both
primary and secondary schools. The Roman
Catholic Church was given full control of
marriage.
When these agreements were signed in 1929,
Mussolinis popularity was at its highest. He had
got what he wanted - the support from the
members of the public who may not have
supported the Fascists but who saw the Roman
Catholic Church working with the Fascist
government, and that by itself created a tacit
acceptance of Mussolinis government.
Source:18
Citation: Trueman

After gaining the power from the church

instead of stealing, he worked to get the
church to accept a Fascist state. He made
a treaty named the Concordat which made
the Roman Catholic faith the state religion.
All the agreements were confirmed on
1929, and the popularity of Mussolini had
risen all the way to the ceiling. It was a
huge success for he had got the
support.[and] created a tacit acceptance
of [his]... government (Trueman).

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Mussolini have to make a decision to whether to steal the power for

the Roman Catholic Church or to cooperate with them. He finally
decided cooperate with them, but they have to accept a Fascist state.
Therefore the treaty, Concordat, was born to make the church faith
the state religion. All the agreements were confirmed and the
popularity of Mussolini had risen all the way to the ceiling. It was a
huge success for He had got the support. [and] created a tacit
acceptance of [his]... government.
In order to increase the rate of receiving the assistance from the
political parties and the population, he needed the most powerful
institution, the Roman Catholic Church. He only required to get the
support, but he needed to change his behavior to be seen as a
Catholic.Some deeds he performed to the church was to renewed his
vows in a Catholic Church to his wife and christened his children. He
later changed his personal behavior to be viewed as a good Catholic.
After many deeds of the church, the public had saw him as a positive
image; consequently, he earned their trust. He earned the churchs
trust as well when he agrees to give what the churches wished for
such as more land and education; furthermore, the church [was] .
exceptionally proud and was fully supportive of Mussolini.(Gajjar)

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He had got what he wanted the support from the members

of the public who may not have
supported the Fascists but who
saw the Roman Catholic Church
working with the Fascist
government, and that by itself
[and] created a tacit acceptance
of Mussolinis government.

He had got the

support. [and]
created a tacit
acceptance of
[his] ...Mussolinis
government.

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After gaining the power from the church instead of stealing, he worked to get the church to accept a Fascist state.
He made a treaty named the Concordat which made the Roman Catholic faith the state religion. All the
agreements were confirmed on 1929, and the popularity of Mussolini had risen all the way to the ceiling. It was a
huge success for he had got the support.[and] created a tacit acceptance of [his]... government (Trueman,18).
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When did things begin to go

terribly wrong for Mussolini?
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APPROVED His biggest mistake, however,

was the decision to enter the Second World
War. On 10 June 1940, Germany had been at
war with Britain and France since the
September, but Italy was still at peace, and
had little reason to fear that any of the other
powers would attack it. Germany was on the
verge of winning the Battle of France, and
France was likely to surrender very soon, and
it seemed to many observers that Britain
would then make peace. Perhaps Mussolini
thought that Italy would be the next target for
Nazi aggression, if he did not help Hitler win;
or he may have just been moved to grab a
piece of France before it was too late. In any
case he declare war on FranceBy July
1943, Italy had lost of it colonies in Africa, and

being the
leader of Italy, Mussolini had made some terrible decisions that led to a bad outcome.
were going terribly wrong when he sent Italy into World War II.

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peace

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Mussolini enter Italy into war even though it was at

He freaked out and send Italy to war
They lost and Mussolini was seen as a fraud
He was arrested

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Perhaps Mussolini thought that

Italy would be the next target for
Nazi aggression, if he did not
help Hitler win;

most of its army, and was being invaded.

Mussolini was deposed by a revolt within his
own Fascist Grand Council, and Victor
Emmanuel III, the King of Italy, who had been
reduced to a figurehead by Mussolini,
appointed Marshal Badoglio to be the new
Prince Minister. Mussolini was arrested, while
Italy attempted to change sides. In the
southern part of italy, occupied by the Allies,
this succeeded, and the new Italian
government helped create the Italian CoBelligerent Forces.

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.Mussolini thought that Italy

would be the next target for Nazi
aggression

Things were going terribly wrong when Mussolini sent Italy into World
War II. Italy was doing quite fine and none of the countries were
attacking in the war. Then Mussolini had thought and feared that they
would be the next target in the war. He then declared war on France,
but as the results, they have lost everything. Mussolini was deposed
by a revolt and he was arrested.

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Citation: Wilfried

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By this time, the World War II was in action and Mussolini needed to find a way to keep Italy from harm. While
working as the leader of Italy, Mussolini accidentally made some terrible decisions that led to a bad outcome in
the war that made Italy lose everything in 1943.Things were going terribly wrong when Mussolini sent Italy into
World War II which started in 1940. As time past, .Mussolini thought that Italy would be the next target for Nazi
aggression(Wilfried,15), so he was frightened and he then declared war on France. As the results, they have
lost everything. Mussolini was deposed by a revolt and he was arrested.
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F Transition Sentence By this time, the World War II was on the act and Mussolini needed to find a way to keep Italy from harm.

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APPROVED After Mussolini forced offensives

in the fall, he suffered disasters in Greece and
North Africa: only German military intervention
in early 1941 preserved him from a military
coup. Thereafter, Hitler dragged Mussolini in
his wake, particularly once the German-Soviet
war overwhelmed Axis strategy.After the Allied
victories of November 1942, Mussolini
implored Hitler to make peace with Joseph
Stalin and concentrate on defeating the
British-American forces. Hitlers refusal and
the Sicilian invasion convinced the king and
high command to overthrow Mussolini in July
1943.

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1941- By the start of the year the Italians have

been pushed back into Libya. In February
Hitler deploys the Afrika Korps led by General
Erwin Rommel to launch a counteroffensive
against the British. Italians sent to support
Hitlers invasion of the Soviet Union in June
also fail.
The Allied invasion of Sicily comes in July.
Italy also appears ripe to fall. Mussolini's days
seem numbered. On 24 July an overwhelming
majority of the Fascist Grand Council passes
a resolution effectively deposing him. The
following day he is arrested. He is imprisoned
on the island of Ponza off Naples, moved to a
remoter island off the coast of Sardinia, then
placed in a supposedly impregnable hotel high
in the mountains of Abruzzi, east of Rome. But
German SS commandos stage a daring
rescue on 12 September and he escapes to
Munich.
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Citation: Harris

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Mussolini caused many destruction

Hitler and someone does want to work with him
Mussolini was sent to prison

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Hitlers refusal and the

Sicilian invasion convinced
the king and high
command ...to overthrow
Mussolini in July 1943.

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Citation: History Channel
1940-Smarting from Hitlers secrecy, Mussolini
orders the invasion of Greece on 28 October
without informing the Germans. The campaign
is a disaster and the Germans are forced to
intervene in April 1941.

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Mussolinis decisions have made Italy suffered many disasters. He

invaded Greece without informing the Germans so they were to
intervene. The Italians went to support Hitlers invasion with the Soviet
Union, but they had failed. Italy was falling apart drastically; therefore,
Hitlers refusal and the Sicilian invasion convinced the king to
overthrow Mussolini (History Channel). Then Mussolini was arrested
and imprisoned on an island.

Hitlers refusal and the

Sicilian invasion convinced
the king to overthrow
Mussolini

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Mussolinis decisions made Italy suffered many disasters. He sent his army to invade Greece without informing
the Germans, for it was a complete disaster and forced the Germans to intervened. The Italians went to support
Hitlers invasion with the Soviet Union, but they had failed. Italy was falling apart again drastically; therefore,
Hitlers refusal and the Sicilian invasion convinced the king to overthrow Mussolini (History Channel,17).
Then Mussolini was arrested and imprisoned on an island.
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Mussolini was first captured by a soldier who recognised him. After this, he was shot and
killed and was taken to be hung for display.

does

Mussolini die?

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APPROVED 1945- With Germanys defeat

imminent, Mussolini attempts to flee to
Switzerland disguised as a German soldier but
is recognised by Italian partisans and captured
on 27 April.
He and his mistress, Claretta Petacci, are shot
and killed near Lake Como the following day.

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he was shot and was hung

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Their bodies are then transported to Milan

where they are hung by the feet with piano wire
in Piazza Loreto for public display and
humiliation. All of Italy rejoices at the downfall of
the dictator and the end of the conflict.

All of Italy rejoices... [ed] at

the downfall of the dictator and
the end of the conflict.

Source #: 7
Citation: Harris

B2 (Actual Sentences) use the bullets from B1 and write them into sentences.

Use
sentence variety - use a * where you want to shove your Q. incorp (Box A). When finished,
look back at EV Box and compare what youve written here to it. If you use any of the same
words or phrasings, or if your sentences look similar structurally, REVISE IT.

Mussolini tried to fled by disguising himself as German soldier. Then

he caught by the Italian Partisans and was shot. His body was hung
for display for the public and ...Italy [was] rejoiced at the downfall of
the dictator and the end of the conflict (Harris).

...Italy [was] rejoiced at the

downfall of the dictator and the
end of the conflict

DParaphrasing with quotation incorporation:

Combine Both A and B2 together with the synonyms of C. You should have 3 + sentences here. Make sure that your quotation is incorporated into your own

sentence.

Mussolini tried to flee by disguising himself as German soldier because he lost in the war. He needed to be
capture because of his bad deeds he done. Next, he was caught by the Italian Partisans and was shot to death.
His body was sent to Milan along with his wifes body. His body was hung for display for the public and ...Italy
[was] rejoiced at the downfall of the dictator and the end of the conflict (Harris,7).
LOOK AT YOUR SUBJECT/ VERB AGREEMENT
PROPERLY PUNCTUATE COMPOUND SENTENCES

PG15
F Transition Sentence When the war was over, Mussolini had to faced and flee from experiencing a torturous death.

Box14EV2: Copy entire box here then cross out the

fat; put in ellipses where you crossed out information. If
you have multiple sources for this box, place the citation
directly after the passage - i.e. (Ayer, 28)

APPROVED Mussolini's body is buried in an

unmarked grave at the Musocco cemetery
outside Milan. On 23 April 1946 it is dug up by a
neo-fascist and hidden. Over three months later it
is retrieved by the police and secretly interred in
the chapel of the Cerro Maggiore convent near
Milan. On 31 August 1957 Mussolini's remains
are permanently laid to rest at the family plot in
Predappio.Over 46 million Europeans have died
as a result of the war, including 410,000 Italians.
Worldwide, over 60 million have died.1946 Following a referendum in June, Italy is declared
a republic with a new antifascist constitution.1948
- The first parliamentary elections of the new
republic are held in April. A neofascist party
advocating Mussolini's ideals wins only 2% of the
vote. Italy has repudiated fascism.

B1

(Bulleted Out) Read the research info in EV Box a few times until you understand
what it says. When you fully understand it, cover it up so you cannot read what it says. Now
you are to write down, in bullets in your own words, what EV Box says.

thesaurus and write them here

Mussolinis body was buried

someone found it
Italy is now a republic
fascism ended

in EV Box,, underline the phrase

that youd like to use as your quotation
selection. Write it here with the
citation at the end. Make sure that it
doesnt exceed 10 words. When you
are finished copying the quote here,
cross it out in EV Box. MAKE SURE
YOU MODIFY IT IF NECESSARY TO
ENSURE IT MAKES SENSE - ellipses
when removing words, brackets when
adding words in

A [The] neofascist party

advocating [defending]
Mussolini's ideals wins [won]
only 2% of the vote. Italy has
repudiated fascism.

Source#: 7 Citation:Harris

B2 (Actual Sentences) use the bullets from B1 and write them into sentences.

Use
sentence variety - use a * where you want to shove your Q. incorp (Box A). When finished,
look back at EV Box and compare what youve written here to it. If you use any of the same
words or phrasings, or if your sentences look similar structurally, REVISE IT.

Mussolinis was buried then it was dug by the police. It was taken to a
chapel and there, Mussolinis remains were buried again. Italy now
became a republic and as for ...[The] neofascist party [defending]
Mussolinis ideals[won] only 2% of the vote. Italy has repudiated
fascism. (Harris).

D Paraphrasing with quotation incorporation:

C Synonyms: find synonyms using a

...[The] neofascist party

[defending] Mussolinis
ideals[won] only 2% of the
vote. Italy has repudiated
fascism.

Combine Both A and B2 together with the synonyms of C. You should have 3 + sentences here. Make sure that your quotation is incorporated into your own

sentence.

Mussolinis body was buried, then it was dug up by a neo-fascist. The body was taken to a police which he later
sent it to a chapel and there his remains were buried again. Not only he was dead, over 60 million of people died
in this war. Italy now became a republic and as for ...[The] neofascist party [defending] Mussolinis ideals
[won] only 2% of the vote. Italy has repudiated fascism. (Harris,7). This ended World War II for Italy had no one
to guide them and they lost.
REDO