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Title:TOBEDETERMINEDYourname:RafaelRosas

Potentialfirstline:
Mariner12beganitsdecelerationprocess.Its167dayjourneywasabouttoend,andits
missionwassettobegin.

Premise(theWhatIf...question):
WhatifthewaterthatwasdiscoveredonMercurycamefromadifferenttypeofalienspecies?
Aplant,thatwhenitbreathedout,causedachemicalreactionthatformedwater?Andwhatif
humansdiscoveredthisplantandtriedtobringitbacktoEarthtohelpsolvethewatercrisis?

Setting(bespecific):
ThepresidentoftheUnitedStatesbeingbriefedinthesituationRoom,andhisbrothers
journals,whoalsohappenstobeanastrophysicistatNASAandoneoftheleaderstothe
probeexpeditiontoMercury.

PotentialCharacters:
Name

Whotheyare(indicate
potentialnarrator)

Whattheydo

AesonRessac

Oneoftwopotential
narratorsastrophysicistfor
NASAoneofpeoplein
chargeofMercury
Expedition

Writeaboutexperienceinupdated
journalexplainssomescientificconcepts
andthenothersareexplainedinthe
briefingsofthePresidenteventuallydies

ArianRessac

PresidentoftheUnited
States,whenheisgetting
briefedthestoryiswrittenin
thirdpersonreader
experiencesitaspresident
does

Periodicallybriefedbystaffofscientists,
firstallpositiveaboutpotentialmovesthat
couldbemadeinMercuryandthenabout
sadthingsasbacteriaspreadsandhis
twinbrotherdies

LydiaFlores

Biologists/virologists

StudyBacteriafindscure/realizesthat
onlytimewillkilloffthepandemic

Thebigproblem
Watershortageurgespresidenttomakeadecisionwithoutexamining
allthepossibleoutcomesbacteriacomesandkillsalotof
humanity.

Timeline:
Event

When

JournalEntry1:probelandsonMercurybasedon
informationgathered70yearsago,digsintoexamine
frozenwaterundersurface

Probefindsmorewaterthanwaspresentthelasttime
thesupplieswereexaminedprobegivenordersto
continuedownward,findoutwhythewatersupplyis
growing

Probeisgivenorderstobringplantsamplebackto
Earthforfurtherexaminationleavesbehindcamera
probetocontinuesendingimagesbacktoearth

Peopledonotrealizecrazydeadlybacteriacomeswith
plantthatreplenisheswater

Bacteriacausesworsepandemicinhistoryofthe
worldalotofpeopledie

Eventuallybacteriadies,asitcouldnotadaptto
humanenvironmentafteritsinsaneoriginalsurge

journalentriesbecomeharsherandharsherasAeson
goesthroughmorestuff

probeleftonMercurysendsimagesbacktoearthof
completelyshatteredecosystemanydevelopinglifeon
Mercurywaskilledoff
5billionhumansleftonearth,alargequantityof
themleftunfertile

Questions:

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