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[https://www.lds.org/general-conference/2010/04/continue-in-patience]
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Sounded like were referring to Heavenly Father when this was at the beginning.
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Checked date and talk. There were 3 talks by Pres. Uchtdorf during the April 2010
conference, so there shouldnt be a comma before the name of the talk.
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Charlotte Noelle
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Either this link or https://www.lds.org/music/library/hymns/master-the-tempest-israging?lang=eng I am not sure which one would be better.
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I love this song! Of those two, I prefer the one with music so they can listen to it too, but
I would recommend one of these performances from the Mormon Channel instead:
Gorgeous arrangement by Tab Choir https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ef2xgL45qX4
Or this one by a BYU Priesthood Choir
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bsQ4NHCYrmg
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Moved hyperlink to first reference in article since I separated it from the article name.
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[https://www.lds.org/church/leader/dieter-f-uchtdorf?lang=eng] states
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