Brenna Kiger

Reflections Worksheet
(Note EACH piece you are submitting for your portfolio must have an
accompanying entry slip.)

The title of this piece is: Phantom Folklore

I completed this piece on (date): July 22, 2015

The genre(s) is: folklore

Heres what I did to complete this piece (Put a check mark or X next to all
that apply):
Brainstorming __x______
Rough Draft ___x____
Revisions to my first, or subsequent, drafts __x_______
Responded to teacher or peer editing comments______
Made a new copy with changes from my revision ___x______
Completed a final edit on my piece _x________

I am proud of this piece because it shows my creative side and capability of

strong writing.

Brenna Kiger
The sentence or phrases I like best are __She frequently was seen gliding
through the woods deep in Central Pennsylvania or feeding on deer that ran
by her.
After everyone wished him all the luck they could give, he promptly crossed
the bridge and walked through the narrow break in the brush into her
territory.

Because they are descriptive as long as hooking and suspenseful.

The changes I made to this piece during revision are use of words, added
more descriptive language to create a more detailed story.

I made these changes because the story sounds better and will engage more
readers with these edits.