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OCR AS MEDIA STUDIES H140

Unit: G321
Student Name: Brad Haslam ( C Block)
Topic/Essay Title: Preliminary Task

“Using DTP and an image manipulation program, produce the front page of a
new school/college magazine, featuring a photograph of a student in medium
close-up plus some appropriately laid-out text and a masthead. Additionally
candidates must produce a mock-up of the layout of the contents page to
demonstrate their grasp of DTP.”

The table below gives you feedback and understanding on how your work has
been marked against assessment criteria for the Preliminary Task.

Assessment Objectives Summative Feedback (Have

AO2 Apply knowledge and
understanding to show how meanings
are created when analysing media
products and evaluating their own
practical work.
these been met? Yes/No)
HAS TARGET AUDIENCE BEEN THOUGHT
ABOUT?
Nothing final uploaded for contents
page, but consideration of target
audience displayed on front cover.

AO3 Plan and construct media DOES THE PRODUCT DISPLAY BASIC
products TECHNICAL COMPETANCY?
using appropriate technical and Yes – some technical competency
creative skills displayed on use of ICT on blog

AO4 Undertake, apply and present DOES THE PRODUCT DISPLAY MATERIAL
appropriate research APPROPRIATE FOR SUB-GENRE?
Material appropriate for sub-genre of
college magazine draft work.

The table below provides you with tutor feedback, and/or their recommendations for key
areas on how to pass the task.
Key Areas for My Individual Development

Brad - You haven’t passed the pre-lim task – and contents page have
not been uploaded, which is unacceptable. This is an extremely poor
effort throughout.
BLOG SO FAR:
• You need to upload all of your skills videos.
• You must upload your magazine video analysis.
• You need to upload your magazine industry research.
• Also to fulfil AO4 more research is needed – more images /scans of
magazines and analysis on their conventions as your blog is looking
bare. Please look at the presentation more carefully – you are marked on
this.
Mark 0/15