The chart compares the use of different types of transportation for commuters in a

city in 1950, 1970 and 1990.

The use of cars increased significantly from 1950 to 1990. 1950, only a few people
drove to work. But, in 1970, about one quarter of the people owned a car. By 1990,
the number of people who went to work by car jumped to over 30%. The use of bus
went up from 1950 to 1970 (approximately 20% and 30% respectively) and went
down from 1970 to 1990 (under 20%).
During the same period, there were gradual decline in the use of bicycle and on
foot. In 1950, more than half of the people were cycling or walking to work. In 1970,
the use of bicycle and on foot still occupied over 40%. But in 1990, the number of
these people decreased to less than 20%.
In 1950, foot had the highest percentage in the four modes of transport, whereas
cars had the lowest percentage. In 1970, bus was the most popular mode of
transport, but foot became the least popular. However, in 1990, while automobiles
have become the most popular means of transportation, bike was the least popular.

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