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submission:
Some evidence is
best obtained through
direct
interviews. (page
404), I found this to
be very true with
An observation or
question I received
from De Piero or a
Classmate:
This approach is
reflected by Lunsford,
who states, Some
evidence is best
obtained through direct
interviews (p. 404), and
I found this to be very
true in my experiences
with Dean.
Dean
This approach is
reflected by Lunsford,
who states, Some
evidence is best
obtained through
direct
interviews. (page
404), I found this to
be very true in my
experiences with
Dean.
This approach is
reflected by Lunsford,
two courses offered
who states, Some
for undersea
evidence is best
After part A happened, obtained through
photography he and
part B happened.
direct
Ernie decided to
interviews. (page
404), I found this to
create a third class for
be very true in my
it which he took.
experiences with
Dean.
He ended up working
As a reader, this
sentence would be
clearer to me if there
was a comma in there.!
He ended up working
undersea and on land
with his photography
around the world for
multiple clients
throughout the youth
of his career.
An observation or
question I received
from De Piero or a
Classmate:
An observation or
question I received
from De Piero or a
Classmate:
an interesting way of
putting how her stare
was.
An observation or
question I received
from De Piero or a
Classmate:
Whats this?
An observation or
question I received
from De Piero or a
Classmate:
An observation or
question I received
from De Piero or a
Classmate:
When placing my
paragraph in different
areas of my paper it
helped me to
understand how
placement is important
to trying to make papers
more clear. I feel that
this helped to show later
on how Dean tends to
run his professional life.
interaction (email) he
managed to write in a
way that was very
clear and concise in
language I would be
happy to [be
interviewed]. What
does your schedule
look like? I am in
Ventura on Tuesday
mornings and
Thursday afternoons..
When do you need to
do this
by? (DePhillipo,
2015). In that email,
Dean managed to
accept an invitation
for an interview, find
an available window