Patrick Boland

TASK

DATE
DUE

Upload summer work

pictures with title and
brief explanation of your
intentions

Early history of
photography and camera
obscura task
- Photo of history
timeline
- Upload photos of
camera obscura
- Explanation of early
history and camera
obscura
construction

10/9/15

Family photo analysis

- Upload 2 photos
with comparison
analysis of both

10/9/15

Target Grade - B
TEACHERS COMMENTS
Upload your summer work, along
with the work you were re-creating
(title and date included).
Choose one image to add as an
enlargement. Explain what you did
well and what you would improve if
doing again.
Label your images as taken by a
camera obscura describe what you
were looking for or focusing on.
Add your timeline (take this from the
AS Weebly page) and explain the key
events describe when photography
changed into an art form and why?
Adding examples of other camera
obscuras, reference to Zoe
Leonards work and detailing the
history of photography would
improve this to the B grade you
should be achieving.
Move to foundation page.
Make your photos larger to see the
detail.

GRADE /
LEVEL
n/a

C+

C+

Change the word model to

subjects or subject matter. This is
elevated terminology.
How do you think the photos differ in
their value to the owner or society?
Are our attitudes to them different?
Is one more precious? What makes a
photo more precious to you the
money it cost to take, the equipment
used to take it, or the moment it
represents? Explain your answer
using PEC.

Investigating exposure
- Labelled DSLR
diagram
- Explanation of
comparison to eye
Aperture experimentation

14/9/15

Good range of images and well

explained description of aperture and
shutter speed.
To improve, think more about your
layout add sub headings for each

B-

explanation of
aperture
- description of task
- slideshow of photos
Shutter Speed
- explanation of
shutter speed
- description of task
- slideshow of photos
3 enlargements of best
images

section, increase title size.

Separate your images into the 2
categories.
Find examples on pinterest or
art2day of others who have used
these techniques effectively.