Liam Vogel

TASK

Mind Map

DAT
E
DUE
1/9/1
5

Essay introduction task

Min 500 words

8/9/1
5

Initial contact sheet with

images relating to personal
investigation of colour

8/9/1
5

Colour theory class task

slide show of class photos
explanation of colour
theory including key
terminology
4 enlargements showing
advancing, isolating,
dominant and receding
colours
explanation of what you
learnt whilst taking the
photographs

9/9/1
5

Helga Steppan analysis

analysis of one of her
images using the
framework given in class

11/9/
15

Target Grade - C
TEACHERS COMMENTS

GRADE
/
LEVEL

This needs to have much more detail in

it. If you make it digitally on Powerpoint,
then you can easily add images and
visuals to strengthen your vocabulary.
Move this to new page called Unit 3
Essay
I am confused I thought you were going
to take photos of shop windows and
interiors. Rob and Nick Carter dont link
to your specific investigation of
consumerism and branding.
In reference to your photographs you
need to have a much faster shutter
speed to capture movement with
superior detail at this level. Look at your
photographs after you take each one so
that you can see if you need to make any
alterations.
Give an introduction to the task what
were you learning about and what is
each colour type?
Label your enlargements with
advancing / dominant / isolated /
receding colour.
Edit your chosen enlargements in
Photoshop to increase their reference to
specific colour theory, i.e. crop or adjust
levels, desaturate / saturate.
For each of these adjustments, explain
what you are doing and why!
You have gone into a good amount of
detail and have described the
photograph well. Well done.

C+

C+

Use your AWL vocabulary sheet to

increase your grade and help strengthen
your sentence structures.
Helga Steppan response
upload photos with
explanation of set-up
justify your chosen

Title this. Explain clearly the links

between artists work and your own
How did you take her idea of colour and
still life and apply it to your investigation

C-

objects
3 enlargements showing 3
lighting techniques

Still life refined class task

slide show of second still
life shoot with magenta
backdrop
explanation of need for
refinement and evaluation
of final images

15/9/
15

of colour and branding?

Mention the specific lighting you created
in the studio.
Conclusion Has Steppans work helped
you to identify the importance and power
of colour in still life? Do objects have to
be related to one another by purpose?
Much improved images for your chosen
theme of landscape photography. Your
images are B level but you have not
included the writing to support them.
You need to explain your actions. List the
reasons for your objects, lighting,
composition, colour. How do you feel you
have refined your exploration of sill life
photography and colour?
Brighten and crop your images in
Photoshop to achieve more of a distinct
separation of colour.

C-