Name:Ruby Scott

Ao1
Analysis.
How well have you
understood the work
of other
photographers

A02
Progression from 1st
to 2nd response.
How have the photos
been refined

A03
Quality of the
photographs. How
has the subject been
recorded

Unit1.5 Force

Task

Teacher Comment

3 artist analysis (9 photos)

A strong section you demonstrate a technical and

contextual understanding of the images you have
chosen to look at well done.

T+

Nadav kander (3 Photos)

As above solid analysis demonstrating a real

awareness of the project and the considerations of
the photographer

T+

Francois Delfosse

The same as above you need to talk about the

individual images and not just give an overview of
the project.

T+

Berd and Hill Becher (3

Photos)

N/A

T+

Force of nature

An excellent section the Images taken in your

fourth response are really strong. Each section
leads on from the last and really demonstrates
your ability to review and refine your work well
done.

T+

Applied force

Well done a strong section with all responses

demonstrating a great understanding of the
techniques discussed in class. The shots of the
peeling paint are particularly interesting and this
section could be developed further.

T+

Imposing Architecture

A strong section the you continually push your self

to produce better images and the fact that you are
shooting so much gives each of your sections
such as sense of experimentation and discovery.
Well done

T+

3 Strands

Excellent work in this section three clear strands

that demonstrate experimentation and refinement
well done.

T+

Application of technique

You have taken on board what has been taught in

class and used this knowledge when taking your
own photographs you have an extremely strong
photographic eye well done.

T+

Composition

Your composition is good and again demonstrates

your strong photographic eye well done.

T+

Location and subject matter

Your chosen subject matters are outstanding and

your choice of locations are well thought out and
well executed.

T+

3 final images

The final sets of images are good but they are just
a series of the strongest images from the project
but they should be a culmination of your final
strand development this needs to be looked at and
changed.

T-

Grade:A+

WAG:A-

Target:B

Final Comment
Well done an outstanding project if the mentioned changes are made to the final piece the grade will improve
further