Resume Peer Reviews From Elana and Chen

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Resume Peer Review

Camila S. Moreira
Name and Contact
The contact information is clear and sufficient.
Education
Basic fact was given. The details were shown in other sections.
Skills
The resume has listed skill in easy to read format. Readers can easily find
the
qualifications they need.
Projects
Interesting projects demonstrate the ability to adapt new technology
appliance.
Languages
Simple fact was given.
Employment
Working experience description contains a lot of details.
Activities
The extra information proves the leadership and organization skills.
Format and design
Layout is professional and clean. Design is friendly and easy to read.
Ethics
The information conforms to all ethical desirable.

Writers Guide Resume Camila Moreira


By: Elana Moore (09/08/2015)
Preliminary Research
The job description states keywords, which you used throughout the
resume. Your Skills section highlights all of your knowledge in the
languages, operating systems, applications & system frameworks that
you have experience & knowledge. Quite impressive! I think you
should move the sections Extra Curricular Activities & Relevant
Courses above Employment, to further showcase the extent of
your knowledge & education. Five languages is also quite impressive
as well! Nicely done!
Name & Contact Information
All of your contact information is clearly stated at the top of your
resume. The
Objective
There was not an objective.
Education
Your Education information was clearly stated at the top with
university, city, date of graduation, and degree.
Work Experience
Your work experience was highlighted and is concise, as the chapter
suggests.
Activities
Your activities match what the requirements for the job. I think you
should move this section & that of Relevant Courses above
Employment.
Interests
Although you did not mention interests, you can clearly tell what your
interests are by reading your resume.
References
There were not any references. I think if you added some from the
field of study and from your extra curricular activities might help
cinch the deal
Prose
Again, putting Experience below Relevant Courses.

Visual Design
The format looks distinctive. The bolded words highlighted important
information and makes it easier to pick out.
Ethics
Looks like you did a nice job of here.

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