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Bullying

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Bullying
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Unoriginal text: 13 words

www.bullyingstatistics.org/content/physical-bullyi

[ sexual Sexual ] Capitalization at

start of sentence

Unoriginal text: 22 words

www.bullyingstatistics.org/content/physical-bullyi

[ males , ] Unnecessary comma in

complex sentence

Possibly confused word: perpetuators

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deal with it differently than others but if they choose to

Possibly confused word: its

torture others just to fit in or have control over the

Overused word: specific

Possibly confused word: scarring

Physical bullying may also cross the line into

sexual 2 harassment or sexual assault 1 if it went
overboard, it occurs in school but it is most common
in middle school age where students are being affected
directly or indirectly by bullying. Physical bullying is
more likely to occur among males, 4 though females
may also be the perpetuators 5 or victims of physical
bullying. Bullies 3 have any number of reasons for
them to act this way, its 7 true that people have their
reasons to act in a specific 8 way and try to show and

victims. 6 The bullies might end up scarring 9 them in

ways neither can the bullies or yourself 10 can imagine
which leads the victims to feel low self esteem 11,
depression, trouble at school, and sometimes even
violent behavior. If a student is being 12 a bullied tell
them that their behavior is not acceptable and show
love and support towards the victim, all young people
should be taught to respect others and that bullying is
not acceptable.

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[ is being is ] Incorrect use of

progressive tense