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30 Minnarrative 1
30 Minnarrative 1
ThereisnothingIcando,ifI
ejectIwillsurelydie,IfIstayinIwillcrash.Ineedtotimeitrightejectperfectly,pullmychuteat
therighttime.Iseethegroundit'scomingcloser,it'sgettingbigger.Bang!Myseatejects.
Whooshmychuteopens.
AsI'mSoaringdowntowardsthegroundIseeaholeacreviceI'mheadedstraighttowardsit.I
pulltothesideagustofwindpicksmeupandcarriesmeovertotheotherside.
IlandandjustasItouchthegroundIrealizei'monthewrongside.Thecreviceitseparatesthe
goodfromtheevil,thenaughtyfromtheniceandi'monthewrongside.
30MinuteNarrativeChallengeWritingAssessmentRubric
TheCrash
TITLEOFWRITINGBEINGASSESSED:
Highlightwhereyoubelieveyourlevelofachievementisforeachofthe7assessmentareasbelow:
Level 2
Level 3
Level 4
Level5- 6
Well Below
Standard
Ideas
many
simple
ideas,
related
to
topic
OR
2 or 3
ideas with
some
detail
Below Standard
At Standard
Above Standard
several
relevant
ideas
with
more detail
complex
and
elaborated
ideas
Structure
and
Language
writing
structure
and
language
are
appropriate
to
purpose
writing
structure
and
language
are
appropriate
to
purpose w
ith
more
detail
writing
structure
and
language
are
appropriate
to
purpose i
nclude
detail
and are
mostlycontrolled
Organisati
on
grouped
and
sequenced i
deas,
writing generally
flows
and
generally
makes
sense
(may be
brief)
controlled
ideas
which
make
sense
but
paragraphs
are
not
actually used
controlled
ideas
which
make sense
are
organised into
paragraphs
Vocabular
y
range
of
everyday
words
and
phrases
with a
few
precise words
for
detail.
Sentence
Structure
beginning
to
include
variety
of
sentence types
(simple,
compound,
complex)
Punctuatio
n
some
correct use
of
punctuation
such as full-stops,
capital letters
May attempt
contractions and
commas
variety of precise
words
and phrases
to
add
information
and/or
interest
includes
a
variety
of
correct
sentence
types
(simple,
compound,
complex), and
more
complex
sentences
are
used
most
punctuation
is
correct and
some
other punctuation
has been used
correctly such as
commas and
contractions
appropriate
words
and phrases to
enhance meaning
Spelling
Spells a
range
of
personal and
high-frequency
words correctly such
as school, where,
Level 6 paragraphs
are
deliberately
structured
to direct
the reader
Ideas
are linked
effectively
within
and across
paragraphs
Precise words and
phrases are
consistently used
to
enhance meaning and
are used for effect
sentences
vary
in
structure and
length
with some
used
deliberately
for
effect
Sentences are
deliberately
crafted t
o
impact
and
engage
punctuation
is
correct and
some
complex
punctuation
is
attempted
such as
direct speech,
commas for phrases
and clauses
OR
All sentence
punctuation is
correct but no
other punctuation
is used
Spells a
wide
range
of personal
and high-frequency
words correctly.
Attempt
s difficult
words.
deliberately
selected
,
effective
and
original
ideas,
with
elaboration
which show
reflection
on the
wider world
writing s
tructure
and
language
are
appropriate
to
purpose,
include
detail
and are
mostlycontrolled
and
effective
Paragraphs s
upport
the d
evelopment o
f
text
Spells
high-frequency
words and
some
difficult
words
correctly such as
weird, through
Spells high-frequency
words and a
range of
difficult words
correctly, with few or
no errors.
friend, outside,
playing
May
attempt words
with more than two
syllables.