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Deepak Senthilkumar
Language Arts - Narrative Writing
November 4, 2015
5A
ISG Jubail

FEAR! FEAR! OMG!

By:Deepak
Prologue
WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU
MRS.MALCOLM ?!?!?!?!? A student yelled.

I am sure it was an accident. I bawled.

NO SHE DIDNT, SHE ALSO MADE THE

OTHER TEACHER TRIP OVER !Another student
squealed.

Do they know about the flashback yet? I bet you dont.

We are going to school. YES!

Me!

Hello my name is Mr.Whimper I am a teacher

working at Hatsun School. Today is the first day of
school. Like usual I was excited. There will be so
many students.

Finally it was time to jump into the car. After 3

million years I reached there, (Fine, Fine perhaps just
30 minutes). There was the teacher I always HATED!
She was so mean to kids. Her name is
Mrs.Malcolm

There were probably only four kids in

her class again. I have no idea how she
became a teacher.

Wicked
Witch

All students named her Wicked Witch.

And all the students named me Comedious Clown.

Here came the moment, I was going to

enter the classroom. Batak! I fell on the floor. This teacher was only teacher everyone
hated. Ouchies! Ouchies! I kept sobbing.
WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU MRS.MALCOLM?!?!?!?!?!?!?
I am sure it was a accident I bawled
NO SHE DIDNT, SHE ALSO MADE THE OTHER TEACHER TRIP OVER!
Another student squealed.

Chapter 2
Today was not the good day, she should have never
done it this day. Actually she should have never done
it!!! Since today is the one and only day that Queen Elizabeth was coming to our
school.

I was badly hurt on my leg. Blood was drooping like hell on my leg.The
students immediately got the emergency wheelchair and made me sit. Waaaaa!
Waaaah! I sobbed. I couldnt handle the pain anymore.Everyone was staring at me.

OMG! It seemed like the whole world was staring at me.I realized. I was so
embarrassed. I seemed like I was a baby just born today!!! All of them started laughing
at me! Today was the most embarrassing day of all!!!

Look at Mr_________ ,he is such a baby! One of the students

laughed.

Shut up okay ______ I bet that you would cry like that when you
get hurt on your leg! One of my students mentioned.

Treatment!!!
All of my students were racing to the
nurse. We reached the nurse. Guess what?

THE NURSE WASNT

THERE!!! The students decided to go to
the hospital. They immediately informed the
principal. My students called the ambulance.
I was so scared! I kept on think was I going

to have a surgery! Today I had so much emotions. Today was also the scariest day of
my life!!! I could hear my heartbeat going mad! It felt like I was a HEART PATIENT!

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Why did my thoughts have to be true!?!?!?! I was going to be scanned in the CT scan!
Hope I didnt get any fractures. Thinking about it just made me more frightened! I saw
the nurse she told me to get on the ct scan. I got on. I was so terrified. I saw this
fainting medicine. The nurse got it on the vaccine. And directly put it in. What is
happening to me I am dying! With a blur everyone was gone.

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Was this true
I couldnt see a thing wait was my heart even beatingI wondered. Someone
wakes me up. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Was
this true where did she even come from. She was flaming in fires there was nothing I
could do but run. I ran and ran then I suddenly saw this shop I was going to be free! I
entered the shop. It seemed like my shadow became alive. The spider webs were
creeping me out.

GET ME OUT OF THIS PLACE! I sobbed. I slowly entered the

shop. In the shop. There was this thing that was bloodcurdling. It was a creepy vampire.
I ran and ran but the vampire was still following me. I saw
this car I hold on to it. Wait why wasnt I able to take my
hands off. The car had glue on the emblem. The vampire
was following me with a truck and the car was going so
slow.

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PLEASE I WILL GIVE YOU

ANYTHING. JUST SAVE ME! I hollered.
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Who would save you, you have never been brave. If I was you I would have
never cried in front of everyone in the school. The vampire stated.

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What could I do, I couldnt handle the pain. I replied.
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So long bro, see you in heaven! The vampire chuckled.
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NO! Dont I will be brave from now on. I cried

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Then the lady that was flaming in fires saw the vampire. The started having a
disagreement. Soon they were fighting like cats and dogs. The lady in the flaming fires
was actually a witch. She cackled exactly like a hen. I took this opportunity and ran
away. Then my body suddenly became to fade slowly.

WHAT WAS HAPPENING?

Everything was blurry.

Happiness
And where was I. Wait was it all just a dream. I finally saw daylight. Thank goodness it
was a dream. Wait was I fine. I couldnt even see my scar. Did I get stitched when I
fainted? Whatever? Today was my lucky day because queen elizabeth was busy and
was only coming next month. And I also heard that Mrs.Malcolm was fired! In the last
few months not even a single accident has happened. This was a great achievement.
Everyone believed it happened just because of Mrs.Malcolm leaving. Woohoo! I loved
my life so much.