Final Reflection 5:

-Discuss your composing processes. Ex. Did you conduct additional research while
revising or after consulting a colleague? Provide at least three examples to support your
assertion.

My inquiry thesis is the best example as for my conducting additional information. At

one point I mentioned the difference between intelligence and consciousness for the inquiry and
my peers pointed that this information was vague and unclear. Because of this feedback I
researched more deeply into the nature of Intelligence and consciousness. After this I revised the
section and it cleared up the confusion. Another example would be in figuring out what could
exactly happen after an AI comes about. Through revising, I felt like I needed more substance to
the section and as such I posted an anonymous posting on a social media center about what
people thought and gathered the results to help form more of the effects. Finally,