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WP 2 Reverseoutline
WP 2 Reverseoutline
What You
Added/Omitted and
Why
Paragraph
Initial Submission
Final, Revised
Submission
#1
(Thesis
Statement)
In this case, I
examine three
sources that Molly
may have found to
prove that the
suitability of any
given genre in a
certain discipline is
dependent on the
audience as much as
it is on the writer.
#2
description and
analysis of front page
of source 1
#3
description and
analysis of front page
of source 2
same
^^
#4
description and
analysis of front page
of source 3
same
^^
#5
structure of source 1
and how it is a move
same
remained an
appropriate main
paragraph topic for
lead-in to description
and analysis for next
few paragraphs
#6
diction of source 2
and how it is a move
same
^^
#7
same
^^
#8
analysis of content of
source 1
#9
analysis of content of
source 2
same
^^
#10
analysis of content of
source 3
same
^^
#11
same
Instead of changing the structure of my paper to better fit my thesis, I changed the
structure of my thesis statement to fit what was in the body of my paper because my thesis was
lacking specific analytical qualities. I did make a few changes regarding how I presented sections
of my essay. For example, when talking about the content of each source, I was more specific in
the topic sentence of that first paragraph by stating I would be looking at rhetorical features that
contribute to the way the content is presented. The reverse outline helped me see that my thesis
needed to better encompass the rest of my paper more than anything.