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Gone Girl-Use of Voice in A Narrative Worksheet (See Below)
Gone Girl-Use of Voice in A Narrative Worksheet (See Below)
Gone Girl-Use of Voice in A Narrative Worksheet (See Below)
Mini-Lesson Rationale
As we are about to start working on our personal narratives, it is crucial that my
ninth grade students have an idea about the importance of using a strong voice in
narrative writing. Yale Teacher Institute claims, that narrative voice engages the writer in
the act of writing, increases the reader's comprehension and brings life to an inanimate
object, the written word (Deschere). These connections are imperative so I intend to
stress this to my students. For starters, I will use an example of a strong voice in a
popular novel. The passage discusses the main characters own opinion about what it
means to be a Cool Girl. This is a great passage for my ninth grade students as they
may be able to relate to her ideals that she is expressing. I will then show them the same
passage, modified in a weak narrative voice so they can see what elements are lost when
a voice in the narrative is not strong. Again, the Yale Teacher Institute suggest students
must be exposed to good literature and try to mimic the techniques with guidance until
they feel proficient at performing them alone (Deschere). After we are done modeling,
the students will then have the opportunity to try finding their voice on a small scale first.
They will simply have to show their narrative voice through exemplifying one emotion.
By starting slow, students can gain confidence in their voice before applying it to their
entire personal narrative.
Deschere, Victoria. In Their Shoes: Finding Voice through Personal Narratives. YaleNew Haven Teacher Institute. (2015) Print.
Formative and Summative Assessments
Because we have just introduced the usage of voice into narrative writing, I do not
want to collect and grade these Emotional Voice Cards. Instead, I expect to see the usage
of personal voice within the narratives of my students grow strong. I will determine this
by looking at the rough drafts of their personal narratives. If I feel we need to work more
on creating a voice, I will do more writing workshops with voice as the focus. A
summative assessment of this concept will be seen as students must write personal
narratives that share who they are (their voice) when writing personal statements for
college applications and other college-prep classes.