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4. Overall, because of its relatively small population,

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the UAE only accounted for one

per 2 cent of humanity's overall environmental
footprint. But the 3 country's very high per capita
environmental 4 footprint needed to be understood,
experts said. The UAE's geographic location put it at a
disadvantage compared to countries with more
moderate climates, said Majid al Mansouri 5, the
secretary general of the Environment Agency - Abu
Dhabi (EAD). "We are living in a dry climate. We need
to use more energy for air conditioning and
desalination, 1 " MrMansouri said. Because of the
energy need to cool homes and offices in summer, the
UAE's winter power demand is only 30 per cent of the
summer peak, data from Transco, a subsidiary of the
Abu Dhabi Water and Electricity Authority shows. 7

Ms.Mubarak, the managing director of the Emirates

Wildlife Society, which works in association with the
WWF, said while the desert environment put some
constraints on sustainable living, people's "high
consumption patterns" also contributed to the
problem.Ms Mubarak added: "The options for a more
sustainable lifestyle are not available here. 8 "