Austin Resing

Mrs. Jankowski 2nd

1. 10/13/15
What are the attractive and unattractive qualities of your hometown from the eyes of a
teenager?
The most attractive qualities that teenagers see in Evansville are the entertainment
areas. The Ford Center, Burdett Park, SkyZone, etc. No teenager goes to the library and says,
hmm this is exciting. Teenagers look for the fun in everyday life. One main unattractive place
teens wish they could never go to, is of course, school. School is lame in the eyes of any teen
that is a fun seeker. Going with that dream teens have, going to skyzone would be a more
attractive place than going to unattractive school.
2 I feel like this is very random
Doesn't really get at the heart of the prompt and sounds very clich
The second sentence is a fragment
2. 11/2/15