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Outline For Argumentative Paper
David Ortega
ENC 1101
12-1-2015
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Recreational athletes, competitive athletes, high school athletes, college athletes, and
professional athletes all have one thing in common: the risk of a concussion. It's impossible
to go a season without one athlete from a team receiving a concussion. The more that these
concussions are studied, the more we learn about them, such as their detrimental effects on
athletes. Because of the risk of health issues and death that come with concussions, doctors,
coaches, athletic trainers, and lawmakers are stepping in to protect athletes of all levels
from receiving concussions.
Concussions from baseball present a substantial public health burden given the
number of youth, adolescent and emerging adult athletes that participate in
contact or collision sports. (Kroshus, Emily, Bernice Garnett, Matt Hawrilenko,
Christine M. Baugh, and Jerel P. Calzo. "Concussion Under-reporting and
Pressure from Coaches, Teammates, Fans, and Parents." Social Science &
Medicine: 66-75.)
These findings underscore the importance of designing interventions that
address the system in which athletes make decisions about concussion reporting,
including athletes' parents, rather than focusing solely on modifying the
individual's reporting cognitions. (Kroshus, Emily, Bernice Garnett, Matt
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Hawrilenko, Christine M. Baugh, and Jerel P. Calzo. "Concussion Underreporting and Pressure from Coaches, Teammates, Fans, and Parents." Social
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Diagnosed With Concussion-Related Brain Disease." ThinkProgress First
Baseball Player Diagnosed With ConcussionRelated Brain Disease Comments.
Concussions are a growing problem in our world because of how it affects your health and
how frequent it occurs; luckily many things are being to solve this problem. There are many
symptoms of concussions that can greatly affect people both physically and mentally. Most
symptoms of concussions occur very earlier, usually in the first days or weeks. Headache,
nauseas or vomiting, balance problems, blurred vision, and a lack of energy are just a few
of the physical symptoms that occur to those with concussions ("Injury Prevention;
Control: Traumatic Brain Injury."). These symptoms not only affect those who have the
concussion, but can also affect others at risk because they cannot complete simple tasks
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safely (like driving). Concussion on baseball are as dangerous as in any other sports that
can physically injured a player.