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Form 6/FPPSCS
Film cover sheet: production portfolio
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Rationale for Muse
Muse depicts the struggle for passion and inspiration from the perspective of three
artists, each working in a different medium of creative expression: music, literature, and
visual art, Though each artist begins with a varied degree of inspiration, displaying a
wide spectrum of creative potential, each artist experiences the same artistic anguish,
ultimately retiring from their attempts at creation, only to find the inspiration they had
originally sought. However, this inspiration does not prove uniform as each artist
interprets this same event differently, resulting in three distinct products. Muse thereby
attempts to grasp the essence of human creativity and motivation.IB Film SL
Commentary on Muse
‘Though our group had begun brainstorming formally within the first
month of the semester, our brainstorming sessions consisted primarily of ideas we had
cach previously had and wished to express in our film. The process was delayed
immensely by our conflicting advocacies. As the writer, frustrated by the lack of
consensus and the prima facie rejection of my ideas, I made the executive decision to
write an idea of mine into a completed script. The speed at which I completed the script
was bested only by the speed at which I decided it was no good. I confided my attempt in
no one and accepted the ideas and deliberations of my companions.
For the next week or so of class we debated the ideas. We each admitted that the
best idea was the three-artist plot that Patty had presented, depicting three different
artists, each in a different medium of expression seeking varied inspiration from the same
source. Matthew and I were of the persuasion, however, that the plot was too deep and
complex to complete in less than five minutes. In the final day we had before finally
presenting our idea to Mr. wwe settled upon a concept following a character
returning a lost item to an anonymous stranger. We worked out and outlined the details of
that plot in the same class period that we tumed in our idea to Stedron. This process
proved faulty as evidenced in the Figure 1.
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Figure 1.After yet more debate, Matthew and I were persuaded that the three-artists idea
was feasible. As a group we decided to include a writer, a painter, and a cellist whose
character would be able to fulfill our requirements for an original soundtrack. I soon
began the process of outlining and writing the script, which primarily involved
converting the vague, general ideas we had for the film into specifically ordered scenes,
One such specification included the varied outcome of each of the artists’ sagas; the
stories of the cellist and writer began devoid of inspiration and ended successfully, as per
the artists’ satisfaction with their works. Conversely, the painter would begin the film
enthusiastically, with obvious inspiration and gradually lose motivation until ultimately
destroying the work he had created. Each artist’s story included two attempts at creation
of art. In the original plot outline the cellist and writer go on a walk together and discuss
their respective dilemmas, thereby verbally conveying several important themes of the
film (Figure 2),
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the script had been based upon protested any major dialogue as antithetical to the silent
tone of the rest of the film. The original script also failed to specify the source of
inspiration of the artists. This absence was filled during a discussion between Tracey,
Patty and I outside of class: we decided that the source of inspiration for each of the
artists should be the other artists. We decided to disguise this inspiration through a series
of visual implications that the artists drew inspiration from a tree losing its leaves for the
fall. The plot twist would only be revealed at the end when the camera would show the
painter's finished product, accompanied by a monologue from Patty's character, the
waiter, explaining the main themes of the film (Figure 3).
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‘The painter emerges from the doorway on screen, holding his painting. The writer starts
narrating what she has just written over the sound of the scene.
The painter tosses his work to the ground and begins.
‘The camera shows the completed work for the first time. To the audience it appears to be
‘a beautifil and meaningful work, From the comer a flame emerges, which gradually
consumes the painting, All the while the writer narrates, essentially describing the
painting, which depicts two strangers staring affectionately at each other, but does not
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‘We began filming by shooting what we predicted would be the most difficult
scenes: those involving Matthew's character, the cellist. Although Tracey had
storyboarded the shots based on Matthew’s outline prior to the shooting date, most of the
shots that ended up in the final film were realized only after arriving on location. This
process would become commonplace during the remainder of the production process,
although each scene was storyboarded beforchand. Concurrently, Patty began editing theshots we had already filmed and Matthew outlined a strict schedule for the remaining
production and post-production (Figure 4).
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As accorded in the schedule we continued by shooting Patty’s scenes in an unfurnished
apartment that Tracey had acquisitioned from a family friend. The simplistic, blank walls
proved ideal to emphasize the minimalism of the writer’s character, and the frustration
she felts over her trade. While on break from school we filmed our painter character,
played by a friend of our group, Ben Lee. AS a talented artist, Ben offered considerable
insight on the creative process, and also offered the suggestion of drawing with pastels
rather than paining, as it would simplify our filming and appear better on screen, Ben's
frustration at having to participate in what he considered a ridiculous film also helped
convey the annoyance and temperament of his character.
Having completed the production process, post-production began in full; Patty’s
editing became more devoted, and Matthew recorded his soundtrack. The editing was
fairly straightforward for the most part. However, two points of contention included the
shot order during the epiphany scene, in which the artists saw their inspiration, and the
order of the scenes in the latter half of the film, On disadvantage of planning the shots on
location was that they had no logical order, which was particularly obvious during theepiphany sequence. As a result, each member of the group had a different interpretation
of the most logical and insightful order of the shots. Another difficulty arose as some of
those interpretations broke from the rigid outline of the scene times, as provided by
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The final post production hurdle occurred after we thought the worst was over when each
of visual elements was arranged and the sound editing began. As Matthew simply
recorded 35 minutes worth of unplanned cello improvisation, it was Patty’s responsibility
to sort through all of the music to find a proper sound, and a proper place for that sound,
Fortunately, Patty was able to accomplish this successfully and the project was
completed on the deadline. The end result, though convoluted, has proven powerful to its
audiences. Due to planning and production difficulties, many scenes do not contain a
logical structure or a clear meaning. In particular, although it is known that each artist
leaves their respective studios in frustration and returns with inspiration, the actual source
of inspiration is never thoroughly conveyed to the audience during the epiphany
sequence. Likewise, though the audience witnesses the final works of both Ben andatty’s characters’, the source of inspiration for both is unknown, My original intention
‘was for both the painting shown during the final credits, and Patty’s monologue playing
concurrently to explain the primary themes of inspiration and insight from the film.
Neither successfully conveys any conclusive meaning to the audience. However, the
effect of the ending is only thereby amplified. The eerie yet moving forms displayed
within the painting Ben destroys, as well as that very act of destruction, convey the
desperation of his character. Likewise, Patly’s intriguing monologue conveys her
character's passion for her craft, and the nuisance of seeking success at it. Though Muse
is a far cry ftom its original intentions, it successfully utilizes film language to elicit its
intended reaction from its audience.