Di y l mt bi mu ca mnh cho dng Line graph Task 1.

Phn ch en l bi mnh vit mu. Phn ch l phn tch v hng dn cch vit
cho tng on.

The line graph compares the weekly consumption of hamburger, fish & chips and pizza
in the UK between 1970 and 1990.
Phn intro mnh ch vit 1 cu duy nht, paraphrase li bi. y bn c th dng
nhng cch paraphrase sau:
- shows = illustrates = compares
- the consumption of something = the amount of something consumed/eaten
- per week = weekly = in a week
- fast food = nu tn cc loi fast food ( y l hamburger, fish & chips and pizza)
- from 1970 to 1990 = between 1970 and 1990 = during a period of 20 years =
during a 20-year period
- in the UK = by people in the UK
- the number/amount of = the quantity of = the figure of
Cu intro ch cn vit nhanh gn, n gin, tit kim thi gian.

Generally, the total amount of fast food consumed per week in the UK increased during
the research period. While the quantities of Hamburger and Fish & Chips both rose
significantly, the figure for Pizza experienced a slight decrease.
Phn overview vit 2 cu, nu ra 2 im ni bt nht trn biu .
Cn nhn vo: Cc im u nm u v cc im cui nm cui (tc l xu hng
chung, ng quan tm n cc nm gia)
Cu th nht mnh s nhn n xu hng chung ca c bi ( y l xu hng ca c 3
line). Cc bn hy nhn vo tng th: cc line ny c im chung g khng? C cng tng
hay cng gim khng? bi ny th c 1 line hi i xung 1 cht, nhng nhn chung th
tng c 3 line ny (total) tng ln.
Cu th hai, mnh xem line no tng line no gim v ni ra (cng l tng gim trong c
qu trnh, so snh nm u tin v nm cui cng, mc k cc nm gia). Tuy nhin
khng cp n s liu. V d nh l line A v line B tng, cn line C v line D gim
chng hn.
Mt s t ng bn c th dng phn overview:
- Generally,
- Overall,
- It is clear/noticeable that... (Lu khng nn dng nhng t nh interesting,
striking features... v mnh thy n khng ph hp lm) ... increased/decreased
during the research period.
- While A (and B) rose significantly/slightly, the figures for C (and D) experienced (a)
slight/dramatic decline(s).
In 1970, the amount of Pizza consumed was highest, at more than 300 grams, while the
figure for Hamburger was significantly lower, at only around 30 grams. Meanwhile,
approximately 80 grams of Fish & Chips were eaten by UK people. In 1985, whereas
Pizza consumption slightly fell and reached the lowest point of 200 grams, the other two
figures gradually went up.
2 phn body, mnh s i vo m t chi tit c th.
Lu vi dng Line graph: Bn ng bao gi m t tng line ring bit (kiu nh m t
ht line A ri n line B ri n line C). Bn cn so snh cc line ny vi nhau cc thi
im quan trng (nm u, nm gia v nm cui - i ln lt t nm ny n nm
tip)
body 1 mnh s so snh 3 line ny im u tin (1970) v nm gia (1985 - mnh
chn nm ny v nm c cc mc quan trng).

Ch : khi so snh 3 im nm u tin, mnh lun ni s cao nht trc. Dng cu

trc: the number/amount of ....... was highest, at....... .
Sau mnh tip tc so snh cc s cn li. Ch cu th 2 mnh khng vit "The
amount of fish & chips eaten was 80 grams" v nh th s b lp cu trc vi cu 1. Mnh
chuyn sang cu trc "Approximately 80 grams..." nh trn.
Sau khi so snh 3 im nm u tin, mnh so snh n 3 line ny nm gia 1985:
whereas A fell to ... , B increased to ... .
Mnh dng cu trc "the lowest point of 200 grams" ch im thp nht trn line ca
pizza.
Lu mnh dng cc t vng dng so snh: Meanwhile, whereas...
In 1990, Fish & Chips weekly consumption grew dramatically to 500 grams and became
the highest figure in the line graph, while Hamburgers figure experienced a slight rise to
about 300 grams. At the same time, there was an insignificant increase in the amount of
Pizza eaten.
body 2 ny mnh so snh cc xu hng ca tt c cc line giai on na cui.
Ch : cu u tin mnh cng ni n s liu cao nht giai on cui, dng cm t
"...and became the highest figure in the line graph".
Mnh s dng cc cu trc khc nhau m t xu hng khng trng lp: "grew
dramatically", "there was an increase", "experienced a rise".
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------Kt lun: Nhng im cn lu vi dng Line graph
- M bi vit 1 cu n gin paraphrase bi
- Phn overview vit 2 cu ni n xu hng chung - tng hay gim t nm u n
nm cui, khng quan tm n cc nm gia
- Thn bi 1 m t cc line thi im nm u tin v nm gia
- Thn bi 2 m t cc line v s nm cui
- C gng dng cc cu trc m t, so snh khc nhau khng trng lp
- Dng cc linking words so snh: while, whereas, meanwhile, similarly, by contrast...
Chc cc bn hc tt!
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