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Newselaanalyticcamden Matthewgarceau
Newselaanalyticcamden Matthewgarceau
Mr.Maslonka
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October262015
CamdenNJisholdingtheirfirsthackathontryingtogetpeopletobeabletouse
technologyintheircity.ThecityofCamdenistryingtoletallstudentsgetaccesstouse
computersandtechnology.CamdencityAyouthdevelopmentorganizationthatamongother
thingsofferstechnologyandtrainingclassesforteenagersandyoungadults(HopeworksN
Camden).Ithinkthatitwillbegoodforthecitizenstobeabletotryusingcomputersandother
technologythiswillhelpthemwithtechnology.ThecityofCamdenistryingtomakepositive
changestoimprovetheireconomy.CamdenCountygovernmenthastakenoverthepolicing
thecityandhasabiggerforceofofficersthanthecityhad,andthestateisofferingtaxcredits
forbusinessesthatmoveintothecity.Theyaretryingtogetmoneyfortheireconomyto
improve.CamdenNJwantstoimprovetheireconomyandimprovepeople'susageof
computersandtechnology.
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