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STORY PREMISE

A Burglar realizes he is actually dead and tries to

get around the concept of burgling without having
a body.

STORY LOGLINE

A Burglar gets into a house easily but is horrified to

discover he is dead when he cant actually pick
anything up. Realizing he can possess objects
though, he decides to be a poltergeist and tries to
possess some fireworks, only for them to go out of
control and blow up.

STORY STEP OUTLINE

The Burglar marvels at how easy breaking into an

empty house is, and tries to take various possessions
from a room but always goes through them. In his
tantrum, he falls through the floor into a room
where a box of fireworks are kept. Testing his ability
to float through things, he discovers he can move
things by floating through and possessing them.
Since the fireworks are the most desirable thing in
the room to him, he possesses them to move
around, but they become out of control and soars
out the window, exploding.

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