Jacob Rushforth 18 January 2016 at 02:59, 8 ary good choice of words to describe your magazine! ;) Reply Delete © Megan Dalby 19 January 2016 at 05:42 interesting pitch ! well done, all clearly understood ! Reply Delete Sophie Harris-Brotherhood 19 January 2016 at 05:57 very good pitch and very informative. well done Reply Delete Elizabeth 19 January 2016 at 06:02 Very clear genre and age range. Think about how you'll place stars because the nature of your chosen genre as groups tend t used. Think about how you'll incorporate people's heights ané importance of them as band members. Reply Delete B Connor Priest 19 January 2016 at 06:06 of words to describe your magazine! Well « a Jaz Leigh 19 January 2016 at 06:27 Good choice of words to describe your magazine :) Reply DeleteAdam Atkinson 19 January 2016 at 08:21 ‘Very good pitch, I could fully understand what your magazine w about. Reply Delete Jay franks 19 January 2016 at 09:51, A good pitch, your video made it clear the genre of music you 1 basing your magazine on as well as the age range you are siminy at. However, you didn't include any images of current magazir ‘that will influence your own design. Except from that, a very ge piteh. Reply Delete Kieran Goodson 19 January 2016 at 12:58 ‘Well made video and an overall good piteh. IIl be interested to ¢ your completed magazine, Well done!t Reply Delete paige rowell 20 January 2016 at 02:56 Interesting pitch and the words reflect your magazine genre well. Reply Delete ‘Marakesh Jarvis 20 January 2016 at 07:00 Great pitch! Nice genre to work with - looking forward to seci your magazine. Reply Delete ‘Tafi Gaza 20 January 2016 at 12:36 Interesting Pitch, i like the specific palettes you have set for ye magazine. Clearly understood your pitch! Reply DeleteTafi Gaza 20 January 2016 at 12:36 Interesting Pitch, i like the specific palettes you have set for y: magazine. Clearly understood your pitch! Reply Delete Max Sunnar 21 January 2036 at 01:03 Interesting Pitch, clear idea of the style you are trying to produce, Reply Delete Alfie Graham 21 January 2036 at 01:04 The genre of your magazine was easily picked out, and I could ea: identify a similar magazine to what yours will turn out to be. Ith your audience may be a little too wide spread and this could shortened so that it is easier for you to design your magazine aim it at a specific age group. Reply Delete Emily Davoile 21 January 2016 at 01:14 T can clearly see the audience and genre. You did not include : magazine covers for inspiration for your own design, overall ag pitch well done. Reply Delete Hannah Goodman 21 January 2016 at 03:40 Really good pitch han, i can clearly see the audience and genre ; are aiming for, you included an effective variety of images represent your chosen words, well done Reply Delete