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Each step is described in detail to make it understandable to the reader,
terms are
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English 111 - Process Essay
December 2015
to Simply go In
those pesky split ends for good While the popular method to eliminate them was
for a tnrn or use well-known hair masks, with this new proced
technique is termed. is a relatively safe Brazilian hair treatment method that uses harsh
Before going into the hair salon to spend a few hundred dollars, one should be sure to
check her stylist's training and background This process is not for the faint-of-heart. and plenty
of practice in required for any beautician to perform the procedure correctly Without bummg all
the hair@Hair
burning is done by using an open flame, usually Just from any normal wax
candle, and passing it under twisted hair strands. The twisting is said to prevent the individual
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sit back and watch as endless amounts of Singed locks fall to the floor
one can
the salon charr
The sweet, relaxing smell of burning hair fills the salon. however. no one should rmnd the turfs
of smoke ee
n in the mirror billowing up behind her head since some small flames do
in fact occur but will likely put themselves out A skilled worker w 111ensure that the dangerous
flame dsn't bum the scalp, too. but will also have burn cream ready on-hand tn the salon.
n invidul
rts own.
followAjptreatment, however, is only necessary if one wants 'mg lasting results frtxn the
veintetapia treatmen , ven though Btatiljnn blowouts are effective on their own through
of formaldehyde and chemicals. Expostng hatr to beat ts known to cause a weakening
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the
natural protective cuticle and so coating each strand in a prcnecve layer Withthe Branhan
blowout after having subjected the halt to ogrn flatTE:sseems like a gcxdIdeasnyooe recemng
the blowout needs to ensure having strajght hatr is the desared yle unce that's the
with t
ess.
Now that the hair has been subpcted to flames and cherrcals. 't should
health. Messy. dneout. fnuy hatr can now
a thing
burning off the problematic split ends rather thnn just altenn
a few major
better option
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