Jay Franks

Analysis of pitches
Jacobs
Pitch

Kierans
Pitch

Tafis
Pitch

Connors
Pitch

Sophies
Pitch

Megans
Pitch

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Adams
Pitch

Paiges Pitch

Alfies Pitch

Hannah Duncans
Pitch

Hannah Goodmans
Pitch

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Marakeshs
Pitch

Maxs
Pitch

Sahils
Pitch

Libbys
Pitch

Jasmines
Pitch

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Emilys
Pitch

Jesss Pitch

These screenshots show me analysing the rest of my classmates pitches by

posting a comment on their blog. I have given them good feedback as I have
explained in detail what I think was good about their pitch for their magazine, as
well as mentioning negative criticism on their idea so they can make
amendments to their idea when it comes to designing it.