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1 29 Eng 107 Tesol Observation Field Notes
1 29 Eng 107 Tesol Observation Field Notes
1 29 Eng 107 Tesol Observation Field Notes
__Sarah_Hynes___________
Date/Time____1_.29.2016______
Class
____ENG107_______________
Location______Coor L1-34____________
Take thorough notes, including quotes and details about the setting and atmosphere, and collect
important class documents.
Keep systematic track of observations that surprise you or contradict your prior beliefs.
Pre-Class Notes (e.g., what are the teachers goals for the lesson? what are the demographics [e.g., student population,
class size, proficiency level] of the class?)
She asked the student write a body paragraph during the class time.
Post-Class Notes (e.g., are there follow-up questions for the teacher? does anything need to be clarified?)
1. How to build a body paragraph around your secondary source
2. POWERDRAFT a body paragraph
1A. Remind yourself and your readers what your relevant smaller question was
1B. Introduce your source. If you need to, explain why that source is credible.
1C. Include your quote.
1D. After the quote (and maybe even before, too!), explain in your own words, what that data means.
If it's a number:
If it's a quote:
1E. If necessary, identify potential problems with your data and address them.
Examples:
Of course, ____ is a little biased, because _____. However, their data remains credible because _____.
1F. Interpret your data (this is one of your biggest and most challenging tasks). In other words, explain
what that number suggests to you about the bigger issue or problem you're looking at.
Think of causes/reasons
If appropriate, think of any personal evidence/observations you can add that will give your readers a more
personal perspective on the data
3
Think of consequences/effects
Examples:
This number suggests that this issue is largely the result of __________
There could be several reasons for this result. __________________
This data implies that the most cost-effective solution would be ______________
This shows that the situation is more complex than most people think it is. Many people
____________ but this research suggests that _____ and ______.
assume that
1G. Identify any further questions that you or readers still have after getting this data.
Student example:
Who in the U.S. has given homes to the homeless? According to Terrence McCoy at the Washington Post, the State
of Uta has a novel solution to the problem of chronically homeless people: the sate itself has given homes to anyone
who qualifies as homeless. McCoy writes that, a University of Pennsylvania study had just shown New York City was
dropping a staggering $40,500 in annual costs on every homeless with person with mental problems, who account
for many of the chronically homeless. In other words, and other big cityNew york city was spending a ton of
money on homeless people already, so Utah figured by should spend that money on homeless people already. So
Utah already figured out a way to solve this question.