The document is about a frog named Fred who lives in a pond. Fred gets lonely and leaves the pond to visit his Uncle Frank, a firefly. Fred does not like living with his noisy Uncle Frank so he leaves and goes to his Aunt Ants for dinner instead. Fred gets tired from traveling and misses his home. When he returns to his pond, he finds that no one is there. The students worked to edit and improve the sentences about Fred's story by using dictionaries to check spelling and thesauruses to enhance word choice.
The document is about a frog named Fred who lives in a pond. Fred gets lonely and leaves the pond to visit his Uncle Frank, a firefly. Fred does not like living with his noisy Uncle Frank so he leaves and goes to his Aunt Ants for dinner instead. Fred gets tired from traveling and misses his home. When he returns to his pond, he finds that no one is there. The students worked to edit and improve the sentences about Fred's story by using dictionaries to check spelling and thesauruses to enhance word choice.
The document is about a frog named Fred who lives in a pond. Fred gets lonely and leaves the pond to visit his Uncle Frank, a firefly. Fred does not like living with his noisy Uncle Frank so he leaves and goes to his Aunt Ants for dinner instead. Fred gets tired from traveling and misses his home. When he returns to his pond, he finds that no one is there. The students worked to edit and improve the sentences about Fred's story by using dictionaries to check spelling and thesauruses to enhance word choice.
work, up-levelling sentences using dictionary and thesaurus. The purple is the shared editing and the green is the childrens group editing. This is Fred. He is a frog. He live in a pond. This is Fred. He is a slimy frog and he lives near an indian waterfall. He wanted to leave the pond. He wanted to leave the dirty, dark pond because he was lonely and had no friends. He go to his unkl frank. He is a firefly. He goes to his amazing and strong Uncle Frank who is a fluttering, happy, sparkling firefly. He doesnt like it because Uncle Franks flashing lights are annoying him! (Aicha, Gabriel, Hasan & Taeyeon). Fred don't like living with frank so he leaves. Fred did not like living with his crazy Uncle Frank because the food was bad and his uncle was unkind, so he leaves. (Calder, Yehee & Saif). Fred doesnt like staying with his Uncle Frank so he goes. (Jorja, Taim and Noora).
then he go to aunty ants. She makes him a nice
dinner. Then he goes to is great Aunty Ants. She makes a delicious dinner. (Shane, Julia and Alya) Fred is getting tired. He miss home. Fred is getting egsosted. He misses home becous he is not happy about that no wan is looking like him. (Chloe, Shamma & Saeed) He go back to his house but no one is there. He goes back to his smelly dirty pound but, no-one is there! Because thier are off to find him. What shall I do? cried Fred. He was so frightened and worried. You have all up-levelled the sentences very well, using dictionaries as best as possible to check spelling and using a thesaurus to add in better adjectives. You all worked superbly.