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    The document provides suggestions for developing the character Shadow/Jericho in a story. It recommends making Jericho start as intelligent but brutish when angry, spiraling into a pissed off sociopath. His inner being should refer to himself as "I" at the end. Other suggestions include making the prologue more mature, reducing meta elements, and adding more detail. Jericho should seem cynical with redeeming qualities. Potential settings include Japan, the U.S., Ireland, Germany or the U.K. The document also lists possible ways Jericho could kill or die, names for characters like demons and angels, and plot points for two books in the series.

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    The document provides suggestions for developing the character Shadow/Jericho in a story. It recommends making Jericho start as intelligent but brutish when angry, spiraling into a pissed off sociopath. His inner being should refer to himself as "I" at the end. Other suggestions include making the prologue more mature, reducing meta elements, and adding more detail. Jericho should seem cynical with redeeming qualities. Potential settings include Japan, the U.S., Ireland, Germany or the U.K. The document also lists possible ways Jericho could kill or die, names for characters like demons and angels, and plot points for two books in the series.

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    The document provides suggestions for developing the character Shadow/Jericho in a story. It recommends making Jericho start as intelligent but brutish when angry, spiraling into a pissed off sociopath. His inner being should refer to himself as "I" at the end. Other suggestions include making the prologue more mature, reducing meta elements, and adding more detail. Jericho should seem cynical with redeeming qualities. Potential settings include Japan, the U.S., Ireland, Germany or the U.K. The document also lists possible ways Jericho could kill or die, names for characters like demons and angels, and plot points for two books in the series.

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    The document provides suggestions for developing the character Shadow/Jericho in a story. It recommends making Jericho start as intelligent but brutish when angry, spiraling into a pissed off sociopath. His inner being should refer to himself as "I" at the end. Other suggestions include making the prologue more mature, reducing meta elements, and adding more detail. Jericho should seem cynical with redeeming qualities. Potential settings include Japan, the U.S., Ireland, Germany or the U.K. The document also lists possible ways Jericho could kill or die, names for characters like demons and angels, and plot points for two books in the series.

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    For Shadow/Jericho in general:

    - Have him start out as intelligent if very brutish when angry, then have him spiral
    throughout story into pissed off sociopath.
    - Make him more, unsure, about Hell.
    For Inner being:
    - At end of series, have revelation refer to himself as I
    Things to improve:
    - Make it more mature in prologue.
    - Make it less meta (dont hint that its a story told by person who knows hes in a
    story)
    - Detail, detail, DETAIL!
    - Make character appear more cynical, I.E. Make him an asshole in the beginning
    with redeeming qualities.
    - Make him question everything.
    Second book setting ideas:
    - Japan
    - U.S.
    - Ireland
    - Germany
    - U.K.
    Possible Ways Jericho kills/dies in story:
    Columbian Necktie - kills
    Blood Eagle - kills
    Upright Jerker - dies
    Crucifixion - dies

    Names for characters:


    Azazel - Is the name of Jerichos inner demon, in hebrew it means (entire removal) and
    (scapegoat) (Up for changing)
    Asariel - [Only in second book] - is the name of Jerichos inner angel. The name means whom
    God has bound and is said to rule over the moon. Jericho means moon in hebrew.
    Surgat - Demon who loves dark places and can open any lock. Can teach Jericho shadow
    magic and how to shadow travel eventually.
    Primus - Latin for The First.
    Possible Names for Inner being:
    Retribution

    Recompense
    Requiem
    Revelation
    Plot Points:
    1. Jericho goes to school
    2. Jericho goes home
    3. Jericho dies
    4. Goes to Hell
    5. Meets Satan
    6. Fights in Arena
    7. Begins Training
    8. Goes back to earth to do Satans dirty work
    9. Finds demon that kills him
    10. Kills friends to get to demon
    11. Kills demon
    12. Tries to kill self, but cant
    13. Tries to prevent
    14. Final part is when offered job by God.
    Latin phrases probably should be used in order to make things appear to be more demonic.
    Latin usually is the language of purity and would be interesting to see demons named after Latin
    names.
    Name for inner devil nick-name:
    Oblius

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