February 26th , 2016
American Immigration Council
Writing Contest 2016
Jorgelina Araneda
Local Coordinator
Mrs. Araneda:
Itis our pleasure to present the written pieces that have been chosen to
represent our school, Carolina Intemational, a charter school _is located in Concord
NC.
They are all Sth graders, who were really excited about the opportunity being
granted by the American Immigration Council and the process of expressing their
thoughts and feeling towards this important current event.
Please, consider our students’ unpublished manuscripts, “ Why | am Glad
America is a Nation of Immigrants”. We are attaching cover letters, evidence of
5th-grade enrollment evidence and release forms for each one of their written works
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Hs & ies Coordinator / Spanish
Carolina Interngtional School
jadyarri mets.comCarolina International School
“Why Iam glad America is a Nation of Immigrants”
Celebrate America Writing Contest
Avery
Sth grade
10 years old
980-2588
704-281-4
Concord, NC- February, 2016“Why Lam glad America is a nation of
immigrants”
By: Avery ._ .-
Why glad America am is a country of immigrants
Is that people of different skin tones and intelligence
I’m glad that the Chinese and Indians are now able to come
Because of the laws the stop them
I’m am glad that not everyone can come here.
A passport not qualify you to come here.
Crime doers and law breakers are not allowed
People cannot come in by sneaking underground
I'm that John Adams law didn’t passed
No one can kick you out because you are bad
Or it’s you religion, culture, or background
Skin tone, intelligence, or behavior not now
The racial quota system was just the beginning
To stop immigrant from entering the country
Now anyone can come if they passed the test
Now were all equal and all are welcomeGood and bad happy and sad
Came over here and wanted freedom
Better life and happiness
Love hoe toa country we share
Memories of life back in their home country
Love and hope
Peace and joy
The liberty the freedom and the pursuit of happiness
Many wanted to leave the danger
And come to the freedom of speech
Many left the families
And came to the bigger opportunity
US citizens are lucky
When others and not
Were spoiled rotten
Some can’t ever eat every day
Immigrant make America great
A country built of immigrants
Through Ellis Island to the quota to now
America was a great nationOr so they think that
We are a nation of immigrants
From china to England
For Zimbabwe to Australia
We are the future of America
This is why | am glad America is a nation of immigrantsCarolina International School
“Why | am glad America is a Nation of Immigrants”
Celebrate America Writing Contest
Dane m
5th grade
10 years old
980-621-
980-621
Concord, NC- February, 2016“Why | am glad America is a nation of immigrants”
By Dane 2-15-16 Fisher
One of the great things about immigrations in the United States
is the fact that so many people are different and we get to
meet all kind of different people. | go to a school that has many
different cultures. If immigration was illegal it would make it
harder to meet people from different cultures. If we only could
read about different cultures and not experience meeting
different people it would not be as much fun. | have three best
friends, we are all from different countries or our families are. |
was adopted from China, one friend Lia, her parents are from
Poland where they immigrated from. My other friend Breanna
her parents are from the Philippines. My last friend Ruby, her
dad came from South Korea. From all of my friends | get to
learn and see all kinds of different food and languages and the
way things are done in their countries. My friend Lia while
visiting Poland has even brought treats and candy from Poland
for us to experience. Also they all speak different languages and
we learn from each other.
My mom and dad are from the United States but adopted me
from China and my sister Mia from Guatemala. My mother said
that right after they got back to the United States with Mia,
President Bill Clinton passed a law stating that all children
immigrating to the United States through international
adoption become automatic citizens of the U.S. My mom said
that this was a great thing for immigration laws because dealing
with the INS was not easy nor fun!Parts of the United States like Boston, New York City and even
Pittsburgh where my family is from have many different
cultures all from people and their ancestors immigrating to
these places. Immigrants and their families have settled here
and now call these places home. They call the United States the
melting pot, which means people from all over and many
countries have immigrated here and have made the United
States there home. When my family and | visit Pittsburgh,
where my mom and dad are from we visit many parts of the
city where there are all kind of different shops and restaurants
from many different cultures. Polish sausage and Perogis,
Mexican food, Chinese food, Italian pizza and sauces. They also
passed down to their children and grandchildren the different
cultures and customs from their countries from where they
once immigrated from. | think this make the U.S. very
interesting and a great place to live.
This year in November we will be electing a new president. If
you watch the news some of the candidates running for
president are against people immigrating and want to change
the laws. | think this comes from people being afraid because of
the bad things happening around the world. But | don’t think
the people immigrating to the United States are bad people. |
think bad people can be and come from anywhere even U.S.
citizens. | believe people come to the United States to get and
have a better life. We are called the land of the free. We live in
a democracy where we the people get to vote for things we
believe in. some countries do not have this and people are not
free to live and do as they please. Immigrating to the United
States makes this possible. As long as people follow the rulesand become United States citizens and follow the laws, |
believe immigration to the United States can be a GREAT thing!Carolina International School
“Why Iam glad America is a Nation of Immigrants”
Celebrate America Writing Contest
Zoe
5th grade
10 years old
704-791-
704-920- __
Concord, NC- February, 2016WHY I AM GLAD AMERICA IS A
NATION OF IMMIGRANTS
BY ZOE G.
This is a story about a boy from India that tries to become an immigrant in America.
“James get the luggage!” his mom said. “yah, sure mom" he said handing
his dad his luggage. After he put all the luggage in the car he went to the gas
station to get a snack before getting back in the car. “Dad look they have all these
candies!” he said licking his lips. “Son you can buy them after you eat dinner.” He
said looking at James with a straight look. “You can get a healthy snack, No
candy. “ When we got to the airport the lady at the counter said that the Visa was
INVALID. “There must be a mistake I just go this Visa!” he said starting to raise
his voice. “I’m very sorry sir but you're not allowed to go unless your Visa
becomes valid.”.
‘The Next Day... “James can you pass the butter?” said James’ sister Alia.
“What's wrong James?” Alia Asked “I just wish we were already in America.”
He said with a gloomy look on his face. “It’s okay son I got my visa renewed last
night when we got home from the airport.
He bathroom door was locked and she couldn’t help herself so she knocked on the
bathroom door and heard her brother’s voice. “Are you okay James?” asked Alia
still chewing her granola bar from breakfast. James didn't answer so she ran to
her parents and told them what happened. When her parents got back from James"
room they told Alia that James was sick so they cotéléh’t go to the airport
tomorrow.
“Aww. But Iwas so excited!” she said with a very disappointed look on her face.
“James too sick to go but we can go on Monday if he feels better.” Her Mom said
closing the bathroom door. The next day “Can we go to the airport tomorrow, I
can’t wait any longer!” said Alia with a distressed look on her face. “Yes, but you
can’t get snacks this time okay?” he said as he gathered the rest of the paper work
from his desk. “Alia can you go wake up your brother?” her mother said makingher bed. Alia ran to get her brother and saw that he felt a little better but not good
enough to leave.
When James saw Alia riding her bike, he wanted to ride his bike to but his mother
said not to go outside so he won't get other people sick. Over the next few weeks
he finally felt good enough to go so the next morning they were off and they went to
the gas station to gather snacks and drinks. When they got to the airport they had
to wait and wait for hours but they finally got to the plane. “Why do we have to go
through all that security just to move to another state?" Alia asked with a very
confused face. “Because it’s very hard to go through if you are trying to become
an immigrant.” Her father explained. “What's an immigrant?” she asked.
“Immigrants are people who move to live or work in another state or country.”
Her mom said. “yup, so we are going to become immigrants when we get to
America.
The EndCarolina International School
“Why | am glad America is a Nation of Immigrants”
Celebrate America Writing Contest
Jibraan
5th grade
10 years old
704-661
704-661
Concord, NC- February, 2016Why I am Glad That America is a Nation of
ibraan _ J Immigrants
2/22/16
Here are some reasons why I am glad that America is a nation of
immigrants.
To start off with, these are a few things that popped into my head
when I first thought about the subject. First of all, I probably wouldn't
exist since my parents were immigrants and met here in America, The
people in America would probably mostly be Native Americans and the
British people that formed that colonies. The country would almost be
like an enormous island that was part of England.
Talso thought about it this way. For example, and overcrowded ship
was coming into Ellis Island. Ellis Island was the port into America at
the time. The travelers would be very tired. If America was a nation of
immigrants, the people would get their bags checked and have moved
on. If America was not a nation of immigrants, the whole ship could
have been sent back to where it came from. Also, the Ellis Island
Museum wouldn't have existed because nobody would've come through
there. There would also be nobody to come and see it because there
would be almost nobody in America.
If America wasn't a nation of immigrants, medicines could never
have improved in the way that they did in America. The story just
wouldn't fit. Some important people that helped with medicinedevelopment might never have existed or never have met the other
people that helped them to improve medicine since they could end up
being born in completely different countries. We could never have
some medicines that we need a lot in the world these days.
Technology could never have advanced to be like it is now if America
was not a nation of immigrants. Bill Gates and Steve Jobs could have
ended up never making Apple or Microsoft or end up making them in
different countries. If Apple was never invented, we would never have
iPhones, and we cannot do without devices like the iPhone these days.
If Microsoft was never invented, I think the world would change
pretty drastically. So many businesses use Windows operating systems
on their computers and so many people use Windows at home. If those
companies were never invented, our lives would be completely
different.
If you think about it, there are a lot of other things that would
happen if America wasn't a nation of immigrants. For one thing, I would
never be a student as C.I.S since it wouldn't exist. There would never
be an American version of a car. America could never have even become
acountry! All of the children in America could turn out completely
different since they could have completely different parents. The
Wright brothers might never exist, and that means that either
someone else would invent the plane or it would never exist and we
would have no choice but to drive to the other side of the country. If
you think about it, cars might never have been invented either. Then
we would have to use animals to take us to other places.These are some reasons I am glad that America is a nation of
immigrants. What makes you glad that America is a nation of
immigrants?
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“Why Iam glad America is a Nation of Immigrants”
Celebrate America Writing Contest
Taylor
5th grade
10 years old
704-905-
Concord, NC- February, 2016Taylor 1 Mrs. Fisher's class 2/10/16
“Why I am Glad America Is a Nation of Immigrants"
One day there was a man named Jhonny Thompson and he lived in
avery bad place named Eggtreesa and in Eggtreesa there were no
voting rights, no honor for the community, no respect for nothing at all,
there was an 89% starvation rate, selfish king, bad queen, robbers, no
cops, and more, you get what I'm saying right?
So anyway, Jhonny Thompson saw on the news that there was a ship
sailing out in the ocean to America and Jhonny knew he had to take this
opportunity so he called and he was in! So he went to tell his parents
and they started to pack their bags. 2 WEEKS LATER.....
Thonny walked onto the ship and his parents stopped to use the
bathroom before they got on the ship and while Jhonny was on the ship
and his parents we not the captain called “ALL ABOARD" and Jhonny
screamed "NO MY MOM MY DAD WAIT DON'T SAIL PLEASE!" But it
was too loud and the captain couldn't hear and the ship started to sail
and it was too late, his mother and father were still behind. Jhonny was
devastated and weeks later he made it to America knowing he would
never get to see his family again. He called his mother and father and
to make matters worse they were at the hospital his father passed out
while having a stroke and his last words were “I love you Jhonny."
One year later Jhonny was still devastated but, he made the best of
life and married a young homeless woman named Kiley and had 2
children name Christianity (the girl) and Christan (the boy) and JoJo
Thonny adopted him when he still lived in Eggtreesa and the reason his
parents got rid of him was because they lived in the worst parts of
Eggtreesa and they didn't think it was safe for JoJo so they sent him
to a shelter where there is more guidance but they did love him dearlyto this day JoJo is 13 years old. And they were 3 of the most loving,
sweet, honest, children, probably on earth. Christianity and Christan
were are actually twins and they are both 1 year(s) old. Jhonny is now
31 years old and Kiley is 29 years old. Jhonny was born September 11,
1985. And Kiley was born May 5, 1987. 4 years later......
Tt's the time that Jhonny finally gets to see his parents. Guess what he
does continue reading if you want to find OUT... mem
The day of March 5" 2006, Jhonny decided to make his mark and
prove to America he can successfully make it back to Eggtreesa. So
Thonny packs his bag at 3:00 am exact and leaves a note to his wife
and kids saying: Dear wife and children I have decided to make my way
back to Eggtreesa and I plan to do this by walking and building my own
manmade boats I have plenty of food that the earth provides me and I
wish yall the best of luck! P.S. wish me luck too! Love you, Dad #
How would you feel if you woke up to a note like that? Well lets check
up on Jhomy.......
Thonny has just finished packing his bags and he is on his way and this
trip will probably take 7 months or so. 1 YEAR AND 2 MONTHS
LATER...
Thonny has successfully made it to Eggtreesa and the first thing he
did was call his wife and children and this is what they said first thing:
Daddy when will you get home? And Jhonny had to admit that he didn't
know so he had no other choice but to say that he has made enough
money to take a plane but he will be staying in his mother’s house for
another month because that's when the next plane goes out to America.
Then Jhonny lost his phone minutes so the couldn't talk anymore. So
Thonny made his way to his mother’s house and after about 45 minutes
in the dangerous routes of Eggtreesa he made it to his mother's house!He rang the doorbell and his mother was so surprised she nearly passed
out! LOL! She said “Oh dear Jhonny how did you ever make it here!” so
he told her everything he went through to get to Eggtreesa and Jhonny
got a spanken. (his mom hasn't seen him since he was 7 years old)
Anyway it has been a month and Jhonny's time with his mother has
ended and this time there's a surprise Jhonny’s mom is coming with him
and she is going to use the bathroom on the plane this timel
AND THEY MADE IT HOME SAFELY!
THE END! Thanks for reading!Carolina International School
“Why I am glad America is a Nation of Immigrants”
Celebrate America Writing Contest
Michaella —.
5th grade
10 years old
704-4551
704-701-.
Concord, NC- February, 2016Running head: WHY 1 AM GLAD AMERICA IS A NATION OF IMMIGRANTS.
‘Why I am glad America is a nation of Immigrants
MichaeilaWHY I AM GLAD AMERICA IS A NATION OF IMMIGRANTS 2
Why Iam glad America is a nation of Immigrants
I did not know how to answer this question at first because it is not something I
ever thought about before. I asked my mother since she is from Jamaica and she said the
fact that I did not fully comprehend the answer is the reason I should be glad that
‘America is a nation of Immigrants. My recognition of America with its diversity shows
my acceptance of the world as it should be.
‘When I still did not get it she asked me this; “Do you like our next door
neighbors?” I told her yes, and then she asked me what some of the things I liked about
them were. I told her that I loved how the women dressed. They are from Jordan and are
‘Muslims. I love their food and how they treat me, they are always very nice. She said that
is one reason why I should be glad that America is a nation of Immigrants because I have
learned acceptance of a different culture, understanding of its traditions, learn about
appreciation of different foods , all without leaving my neighbourhood.
‘America, Land of the Free and home of the brave. America is the Land of
opportunities, where each person has the freedom and the right to practice their own,
religion and beliefs. I am a direct descendant of an immigrant, my mother, and she has
taught me what a wonderful gift she was given in coming to the United States and being a
part of a nation of American immigrants.‘WHY I AM GLAD AMERICA IS A NATION OF IMMIGRANTS 3
In 1984, my Mother Cynthia decided to migrate here to the United States. Jamaica
isa very beautiful country, I could not understand why she would have wanted to do that,
one-day I asked her, and this is what she said.
“Michaeila Jamaica is a lot different now than it used to be. It was more naturally
beautiful but was economically poor. When I was a young girl, I was used to seeing
young women finishing school getting married and having babies. I did not want that for
myself, my dream was to go to University and become a Lawyer. I wanted to own my
own law firm and knew that I could not do that in Jamaica. I already had family that had
immigrated to many countries across Europe, but I wanted to come to the United States
because I heard there were more opportunities for women to be educated and to get into
businesses. However, one of the biggest draw was that there were so many different
cultures interacting. I love diversity, and being able to socialize with different cultures in
one nation was the next best thing to going to each individual country.”
My mother did not become the lawyer that she dreamed of as a young girl but she
did get her MBA in Business Travel and Tourism, she is a certified Para-legal, she got
married and now has four children. She is an entrepreneur, and currently back in school
‘working on her masters in Psychology. She says that her success is a result of being in
America and its friendliness to Immigrants. Additionally, she said that although she willWHY I AM GLAD AMERICA IS A NATION OF IMMIGRANTS
always love the land of her birth, the day she gave her oath and became a Naturalized
“American Citizen was a day that will forever bring joy to her.
‘The Caribbean brought us rice and peas with coconut milk, and Jerk meat and
fish. India is famous for its spices such as curry. Mexicans introduced us to tortilla, the
Spanish to another type of tortilla which is a breakfast dish made with eggs and potatoes.
‘The Asian people introduced us to Fried Rice and other Cantonese foods.
Thave the pleasure of having friends of many cultures and they are all here in the
country of my birth, The United States of America. One Nation under God, Indivisible,
with liberty and justice for all.
References:
Cynthia Green
‘The pledge of allegiance