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U3 l43 9th Response To NF Essay Manual
U3 l43 9th Response To NF Essay Manual
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Essay Prompt
Who could have prevented or stopped Davids harmful obsession from getting out
of control?
Model Claim: As David's fascination with science developed into something dangerous,
dishonest, and at times illegal, (person's name) might have been able to prevent or stop
this harmful obsession from getting out of control.
Assignment:
Using the readings presented in class and your own knowledge and research, write an argument
elaborating on a person who may have been able to prevent David's obsession from getting out of
control.
Write a 3-4 page argument which responds to the prompt in a thoughtful way and elaborates to create
a meaningful argument.
Length & Format:
To prepare you for this task, you will have built background knowledge by reading, discussing, and
writing about David Hahn's experiments with nuclear energy and read excerpts from two other
authors, Marie Curie and Richard Rhodes.
College Writing 9
Requirements:
Cannon 1 of Rhetoric: Invention
1. 3 claims which focus on different people in David's life
2. One polished, chosen claim
Cannon 2 of Rhetoric: Arrangement
1. Outline
Introduction:
Thesis
Body Paragraphs:
Background Information
Claims
Evidence
Fragments
Conclusion:
Restated Thesis
Cannon 3 of Rhetoric: Style
1.
2.
3.
4.
5. Remember to review the directions and the rubric. Also, proofread for grammatical/CUPS
(capitalization, usage & grammar, punctuation, and spelling) and verb tense errors.
Cannon 4 of Rhetoric: Memory
1. Notecards (maximum of 4)
Cannon 5 of Rhetoric: Delivery
1. Speech
Not specific:
Specific: Government surveillance programs do more harm than good because they invade civil
liberties, lead innocent people to suffer unfair punishments, and ultimately fail to protect the citizens
that they are designed to safeguard.
Non-arguable:
Arguable: Wisconsin schools' dependence on technology has caused students to lose the ability to
think independently, causing a greater prevalence of mood disorders, memory loss, and loneliness.
Unclear:
supports them.
Clear: Homeless shelters help many people who have lost their way in life and cannot get back on
their feet, so the government economically supports facilities and programs like this.
I.
Introduction: Capture the audience's interest, introduces the issue, and set out your position with a
thesis.
A. get the reader's attention by using a "hook."
B. use engaging language.
C. thesis or main claim.
II.
Narration: Establish background information and context for your argument so that your audience
can evaluate your claim fairly.
a. provide background information and context about the issue
b. explain the situation, the issue at stake, and its history
c. define important terms or ideas
d. begin with claims/topic sentences
III.
Confirmation: Use reasoning to explain why you believe in your thesis and persuade your audience
to agree.
a. contain cited evidence, examples, facts, and definitions to prove the claim of the
paragraph
b. explain why the evidence supports the claims and the larger thesis
c. logical elaboration relating back to your point.
d. begin with claims/topic sentences
e. end with a clincher which provides a sense of closure to your idea in this paragraph
and/or transitions to your next idea.
IV.
II.
III.
IV.
V.
VI.
VII.
Works Cited
Dickens, Charles. Great Expectations. New York: Dodd, Mead, 1942. Print.
Foucault, Michel. Madness and Civilization: A History of Insanity in the Age of Reason. Trans.
Richard Howard. New York: Vintage-Random House, 1988.
Gillespie, Paula, and Neal Lerner. The Allyn and Bacon Guide to Peer Tutoring. Boston: Allyn,
2000. Print.
Saint-Exupry, Antoine. The Little Prince. Trans. Richard Howard. San Diego: Harcourt, 2000.
Print.
20. Code-switch your language to increase the academic tone. Lose the word very and, like, you
know, other informal, useless phrases from, you know, your written and spoken vocabulary.
Focus
Your written response
shows an
understanding and
interpretation of the
writing prompt.
10
8.5
6.5
30%
Development
(Evidence)
Your written response
gives a clear and
logical explanation of
ideas, using supporting
material.
Little or no use of
relevant or convincing
textual evidence.
Includes no unique
observations or
meaningful elaboration.
Little or no evidence of
logical sequencing
and/or clear paragraph
development.
30%
Logical
Structure
Your written response
flows logically
through the use of
transitions and sister
sentence coherency
techniques.
20%
Grammar
Your written response
shows a sense of
audience by using
effective vocabulary
and varied sentence
structure.
20%
No real transitions.
No connection between
different parts of the
essay.