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Copyofcc Characters TTWTMP 2ndblockexemplar
Copyofcc Characters TTWTMP 2ndblockexemplar
MLAFormat:
Margins:1margins
Font:TimesNewRoman/Blackfontcolor/12pointfontsize/Noboldingorunderlining
Heading:Studentname,Instructorname,Course,andDate/Alignedtotheleft
Spacing:double
Title:Centered/NameofAssignment
TopicSentence:
Topicsentencesconsistentlyserveasanumbrellafortherestoftheparagraphdetails.
SupportingDetails:
Contentincludesthefollowing:
2comparisons/3contrastsfullydevelopedwithexplanationwhenneeded
3comparisons/2contrastsfullydevelopedwithexplanations
4X2=8
Transitions:
Useoffiveormoretransitionstoconnectsentences
UseofatransitionsentencetomovefromcomparisontocontractsORcontrasTtocomparison
Length:
710sentences
ConcludingSentence:
Concludingsentencesummarizesthebasicpremiseoftheparagraph
SpellingandCapitalization:
Allwordsarecorrectlyspelled.
Propernouns/properadjectivesarecapitalized.
Commonnounsandotherpartsofspeecharenotcapitalized.
Punctuation:
PeriodsareusedaccordingtotherulesofStandardAmericanEnglish(SAE).
CommasareusedaccordingtotherulesofStandardAmericanEnglish(SAE).
ApostrophesareusedaccordingtotherulesofStandardAmericanEnglish(SAE).
SemicolonsareusedaccordingtotherulesofStandardAmericanEnglish(SAE).
ColonsareusedaccordingtotherulesofStandardAmericanEnglish(SAE).
Titlesofworksareappropriatelypunctuated.
Grammar:
Verbsareintheappropriatetense
andhaveagreementwiththeirsubjects.
Correctverbformhasbeenused.
Pronounshaveclearantecedentsandagreewiththeminnumberandgender.
Pronounsare3rdpersonexceptwhenusedinquotes.
Runonsandsentencefragmentsareabsentfromthetext.
Scoring:
4ExcellentresponseAllofthecriteriaidentifiedinthecomponenthasbeendemonstrated.
3SatisfactoryresponseMostofthecriteriaidentifiedinthecomponenthasbeen
demonstrated.
2UnsatisfactoryresponseFewofthecriteriaidentifiedinthecomponenthasbeen
demonstrated.
1PoorresponseMostofthecriteriaidentifiedinthecomponenthas
NOT
beendemonstrated.
0Noevidenceofcomponentoritscriteria
ThesectionforSUPPORTINGDETAILSwillbedoubled.(A4wouldgiveyou8pointsonthat
section.)
TOTAL39OF40=98%
StudentName
Mrs.G.Gordon
ELA8thGradeHonors
20January2016
ComparisonsandContrastsoftheMainCharactersinTheMonkey'sPawandTheThird
Wish
ThemaincharactersofTheThirdWishbyJoanAikenandTheMonkey'sPawby
W.W.Jacobshavebothdifferencesandsimilarities.First,Mr.Petersdoesn'thaveachildwhile
Mr.WhiteandMrs.WhitehavetheirsonHerbert.Secondly,inTheThirdWish,Mr.Peters
receiveshiswishesfromsavingTheKingoftheForest.However,Mr.Whitegetsthemonkey's
pawfromthefirewhenSergeantMajorMorristhrowsitin.Thirdly,Mr.Petersnevermakeshis
thirdwish,butMr.Whitedoes.Inadditiontothesecontrasts,thecharactersalsocontain
similarities.First,theybothreceive3wishes.Secondly,theyarebothrisktakersbecauseMr.
Petersdoesn'tknowwhatwillhappenwhenhesavedtheswanorwishforawife,andMr.
Whitedoesn'tknowtheoutcomeforwhenhewishedforHerberttogobacktothedead.While
themaincharactersofthesetwostoriescontainbothcontrastsandcomparison,thedifferences
outweighthesimilarities.