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RubricforParagraphonComparison&ContrastofCharacters

MLAFormat:
Margins:1margins
Font:TimesNewRoman/Blackfontcolor/12pointfontsize/Noboldingorunderlining
Heading:Studentname,Instructorname,Course,andDate/Alignedtotheleft
Spacing:double
Title:Centered/NameofAssignment

TopicSentence:
Topicsentencesconsistentlyserveasanumbrellafortherestoftheparagraphdetails.

SupportingDetails:
Contentincludesthefollowing:
2comparisons/3contrastsfullydevelopedwithexplanationwhenneeded
3comparisons/2contrastsfullydevelopedwithexplanations

4X2=8

Transitions:
Useoffiveormoretransitionstoconnectsentences
UseofatransitionsentencetomovefromcomparisontocontractsORcontrasTtocomparison

Length:
710sentences

ConcludingSentence:
Concludingsentencesummarizesthebasicpremiseoftheparagraph

SpellingandCapitalization:
Allwordsarecorrectlyspelled.
Propernouns/properadjectivesarecapitalized.
Commonnounsandotherpartsofspeecharenotcapitalized.

Punctuation:
PeriodsareusedaccordingtotherulesofStandardAmericanEnglish(SAE).
CommasareusedaccordingtotherulesofStandardAmericanEnglish(SAE).
ApostrophesareusedaccordingtotherulesofStandardAmericanEnglish(SAE).
SemicolonsareusedaccordingtotherulesofStandardAmericanEnglish(SAE).
ColonsareusedaccordingtotherulesofStandardAmericanEnglish(SAE).
Titlesofworksareappropriatelypunctuated.

Grammar:
Verbsareintheappropriatetense
andhaveagreementwiththeirsubjects.
Correctverbformhasbeenused.
Pronounshaveclearantecedentsandagreewiththeminnumberandgender.
Pronounsare3rdpersonexceptwhenusedinquotes.
Runonsandsentencefragmentsareabsentfromthetext.

Scoring:
4ExcellentresponseAllofthecriteriaidentifiedinthecomponenthasbeendemonstrated.
3SatisfactoryresponseMostofthecriteriaidentifiedinthecomponenthasbeen
demonstrated.

2UnsatisfactoryresponseFewofthecriteriaidentifiedinthecomponenthasbeen
demonstrated.
1PoorresponseMostofthecriteriaidentifiedinthecomponenthas
NOT
beendemonstrated.
0Noevidenceofcomponentoritscriteria
ThesectionforSUPPORTINGDETAILSwillbedoubled.(A4wouldgiveyou8pointsonthat
section.)

TOTAL39OF40=98%

StudentName
Mrs.G.Gordon
ELA8thGradeHonors
20January2016
ComparisonsandContrastsoftheMainCharactersinTheMonkey'sPawandTheThird
Wish
ThemaincharactersofTheThirdWishbyJoanAikenandTheMonkey'sPawby
W.W.Jacobshavebothdifferencesandsimilarities.First,Mr.Petersdoesn'thaveachildwhile
Mr.WhiteandMrs.WhitehavetheirsonHerbert.Secondly,inTheThirdWish,Mr.Peters
receiveshiswishesfromsavingTheKingoftheForest.However,Mr.Whitegetsthemonkey's
pawfromthefirewhenSergeantMajorMorristhrowsitin.Thirdly,Mr.Petersnevermakeshis
thirdwish,butMr.Whitedoes.Inadditiontothesecontrasts,thecharactersalsocontain
similarities.First,theybothreceive3wishes.Secondly,theyarebothrisktakersbecauseMr.
Petersdoesn'tknowwhatwillhappenwhenhesavedtheswanorwishforawife,andMr.
Whitedoesn'tknowtheoutcomeforwhenhewishedforHerberttogobacktothedead.While
themaincharactersofthesetwostoriescontainbothcontrastsandcomparison,thedifferences
outweighthesimilarities.

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