TAJUK : SATU BILIK DUA BILIK

TULISAN : faridmrosli
DURASI : 10 minit
MASA : pukul 10am
Watak & Perwatakan
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Ayah (AcHik)
Anak perempuan (Sartika)
Receptionist (Zahier)
Ostat (Syamil)
Mak (Nad)
Anak lelaki (kalau ada)

Scene 1. INT. Interview (Opening image)

Ayah
Saya nak satu. Ye lah...darah daging saya kot. Takkan lah
tak boleh. Peduli apa orang cakap
I want only one. Shes my daughter for god sake. I dont
care what people will think.
Santika
Kenapa pilih satu? Kan I dah cakap, Ive told him about
this while we were still at home. I nak dua!
Why did he wanted only one room? ive told him about this
While we were still at home. I wanted two!
Ayah
Satu tak boleh ke? Kena dua eh?
Whats wrong with one room? does it have to be two?
Santika
Dua! Dua! Why is it so hard to understand? This is not
rocket science.
Two! Two! *copy paste la lahanat
Scene 2.INT.lobby hotel. Pengenalan watak
Ayah dan anak masuk ke lobby hotel. MCU ayah. Freez.
Pengenalan watak. Smbung balik. MCU anak. Freez. Sambung
balik berjalan menuju kaunter. Penyambut tetamu menyambut
depa.
Zahier
balik.

senyum

dikaunter

sambut

depa.

Freez.

Sambung

Scene 3. INT. Kaunter hotel

Achik, Santika n Zahier
Zahier
(Jawab phone call dalam bahasa cina then letak telefon)
Hello, welcome sir. May I help u.
AcHik
Ada bilik kosong? Saya nak yang paling mahallah kalau
boleh
Are there any rooms available? I want the most expensive
room there is.
Santika
(REACTION SHOT- pandang pelik ke bapak dia)
Zahier
Dah buat... reservation?
Did you call for reservation?
AcHik
Kalau saya buat reservation saya tak Tanya la. skrang ni
ada bilik kosong ke tak?
If I already made the reservation I wouldnt have this
question. So, are there any available rooms or not?
Zahier
Amboooii encikk..(Muka sentap n reply dgn nyanyi lagu
Magic-Rude)
(Bapak n anak buat muka no reactions)(muka krik2)
Zahier
Wait seminit sir. (tengok skrin pc) urmmmoooooo (tengok
skrin n tgok kat muka datok)
Give me a minute sir.
Sir..(Pause 2sec.)satu bilik kedua bilik?
Do you want one room or two rooms?
CUT TO: Black screen. Super TITLE SATU BILIK KE DUA
BILIK

SCENE 4. INT. Interview based on SCENE 1

Zahier
Itu kaki pijak kepala punya olang oo manyak sombong.
Olang putih cakap, impolite. @#$%^
That was really snobbish of him . really impolite.
Iqbal
Huh..nampak je macam orang kaya. Tips pun tak bagi

Achik
Saya saje je mintak bilik paling mahal. Saya ni ahli
korporat. Kena jaga imej. Takkan la nak bilik murah.
I work in a corporate world. My image is very important.
I cant be caught staying in a cheap room. thats why I
asked for the expensive one.
Sartika
You know what?? That guy sangat tak cool
okeyy..butt..urmmm..ensem..(gedik high class)
*copy paste * that guy was so not cool. But quite
handsome.
SCENE 5. INT. Rumah
Bapak balik dari keja. Bagitau ke bini dia nak pegi
outstation.
Bini
dia
tak
bole
teman
sbb
meeting
persatuan, anak lelaki pon tak bole pegi sbb gathering
teman sbb then anak dara dia yg temankan.
Bapak
(Balik keja duduk atas kerusi)
Honey..u teman I outstation esok kat JayBee pliss.
Honey, would you please come with me tomorrow to JB
Bini
(Baca magazine, polish kuku)
sorry dear , I cant. I kena meet datin lily besok. I dah
janji.
Sorry dear, I cant . I have to meet Datin Lily tomorrow.
I promised her.
Bapak
Dah tu sape nak teman I?
And then whose gonna come with me?
Anak lelaki
Amin ada recital piano esok. Mana boleh.
Amin has a piano recital tomorrow. I cant.

Bapak
So amin tak nak ikut ?
So, you dont wanna go?
Amin
(Reaksi muka taknak)
Mak
I tak boleh. You tau kan I busy macam mana? Try kakak.
I canttt. You know how busy I am, right? Go ask kakak.
Bapak
Kakak free?
Are you free?
Santika
Boleh je. Tapi. . .asalkan daddy tak berkira. akak nak
duit pocket sikit, pedicure manicure, dan privasi akak.
Thats all. Hmmmmm
I can . but only if you are not stingy. I want some
pocket money, pedicure, manicure, and my own privacy.
Thats all.
Scene 6 INT Interview based on SCENE 5.
Mak
Selalunya memang I ikut. Bukan boleh percaya sangat orang
tua tu. Selalunya I ikut I akan duduk dekat bilik je.
Boring. Better I networking dengan Datin. Dapat jugak
projek.
Usually, I would have go with him. I dont really trust
him going by his own. But then, I would end up staying in
my room all day. Boring. Its better to go out with other
Datin.
Anak Lelaki
Amin taknak ikut ah. Tak pergi pun recital piano. Amin
nak dating hihihi *i dah lama tak suka JDT
I dont wannna go. Im not going to the piano recital
either. Im going out on a date. hiiiii
Bapak
Nak pergi sorang? Memang tak lah.
Im definitely not going there alone.
Anak Perempuan
Wuuuuuuu. I okay jer. Dapat jalan2. Daddy bagi duit
lagi. Gilerrr tak nak?
(Angkat phone, Hello you, I pergi JB esok!!)
Im okay with that. I can go sightseeing . plus he will
give me some cash. Of course I wanna go.
Hello babe, Im going to JB tomorrow !

Scene 7 INT. Lobi Hotel (scene 1 balik)

Scene konflik antara ayah dan anak perempuan.
Scene 7 INT. Interview based on scene 6
Ustaz
(peghak) Laaaaaa. Jadi masalah pulak. Yang sorang nak
satu, yang sorang nak dua. Dok begaduh abih.
They keep fighting about one or two rooms. Its not even a
big problem.
Receptionist
Pasal tu pun gaduh? *satu ke dua ke, sama saja. Gila.*
Kalau aku, 1 je lah. Selamat duit
One room, two rooms whats the different. If it was me, I
would choose one.
Ustaz
Laaaamana saya tau..saya mana kenai depa..saya baru
sampai ni hahanak beranak ka..laki bini ka
wallahuaqlamm
I dont even know them. I just arrived here. So I dont
know whether they are husband and wife or father and
daughter. Who knows.
Scene 7. EXT. Depan pintu bilik
Ustaz nak masuk bilik selisih dgan ayah n anak nak masuk
bilik gak. Bertegur
Ayah senyum kat ustaz. Ustaz senyum balik
Ustaz
Lama ka dok sini? Orang umah ka ni?
How long have you been sitting here. Wheres your wife?
Bapak
Aih doooookk aih..ni anak..
Oh no. that was my daughter.
Ustaz
Laaaaa..aaaaa.oooooooo
Scene 8. EXT. Interview
Ustaz
Mula2 saya ingat dia ngan orang umah. Tu saya dok pelik
pasai apa depa nak gaduh.

At first, I thought it was your wife. I didnt understand

why you guys were fighting about.
(EXPLAIN HADIS)
Bapak/Anak
Habih tu..kalau ostaz..satu bilik ka dua bilik?
So if it was you, one room or two rooms?
-ENDS-