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WP 2
WP 2
Jessica Smith
Writing 2
De Piero
16 February 2016
The Many Sciences Behind MDMA
Any subject can be studied from multiple disciplines. When you look through one lens,
one can find one set of information, and when looking through another, one can find
something entirely different. The authors moves help define these different disciplines
and when analyzing them on their rhetorical features, information can be organized and
assessed based on the differing disciplines. When examining
methylenedioxyphenethylamine, or MDMA, very diverse information can be examined
when studying it from different perspectives. I will analyze the conventions of three
different articles, "MDMA Enhances Emotional Empathy and Prosocial Behavior,"
"Binge Ethanol and MDMA Combination Exacerbates Toxic Cardiac Effects by Inducing
Cellular Stress," and "From Gary to Molly: The Feminisation of Ecstasy in Popular
Culture, all on the topic of MDMA. These disciplines include biological, psychological
and sociocultural. While the articles on MDMA are similar to one another, one can
observe that the intended purpose of the article influences the writers moves based on
the inclusion of background information and jargon within the articles.
Each writing discipline targets a different intent of purpose. For the articles being
examined, the purpose differs on the subject areas related to the study of MDMA. Each
author studies MDMA differently, and all [their] writing consists of a series of choices,
which are based on the genre of that writing (Bunn 81). An author carefully chooses
which information to include in his or her writing in order to best put across the point that
he or she is trying to make. When a reader examines an article, he or she can usually
tell from the language, what the purpose of the article will be. As Lunsford explains in
Style in Arguments, the words you choose for an argument help define its style and
yours (Lunsford 310). Lunsford explains that the word choices one uses in their work
helps set the tone of the information at hand and can better explain the purpose of the
articles. In the article from Thump, the purpose of the article is to explain the history and
progression of the drug MDMA to an audience of electronic music fans. These readers
are engrossed in a drug culture that is associated with the phenomenon associated with
the music. The website intends to make the information familiar and informal to stay
consistent with the music culture style of the website. In order to stay consistent, the
authors language choice, or jargon, reflects this style. When explaining the beginnings
of the MDMA culture, the author describes, the era was one of psychedelic tie-dyes
and smiley faces (Harrison). These descriptive words can be classified as slang or
colloquial language. In many types of writing, this language would be inconsistent with
the style, but because the purpose of the article is intended to inform readers who are
associated with the electronic music culture, this information helps them better relate to
and understand the information at hand. Harrison also refers to people involved in
deciding to consume MDMA as being involved in a new party culture (Harrison). This
description of the MDMA phenomenon as a party culture is a move that makes the
material more relatable to the readers because the information helps acquaint readers
with the time period and is therefore appropriate for the purpose of the article, but in
many other types of writing, this information would be understood as too informal of a
description.
and therefore are important to the purpose of this article. For the biological article on the
cardiac effects of MDMA, this information would not be relevant to the purpose of the
article. The author also defines cognitive empathy as the ability to recognize emotional
included headings, the headings differed for each whereas the psychological discipline
would include headings associated with emotional aspects such as Multifacted
Empathy Test. As for the sociocultural discipline, there were no headings included and
rather there was no defined organization for the article. There was the inclusion of
colloquial language and the article could be better defined as a stream of
consciousness with a more casual tone. Questions are also used in different ways
based on whether the language is colloquial or not. In the Thump article, questions are
used to make the reader think and transition ideas whereas that would not be proper in
the other disciplines. These structures and regulations can be related to the differences
of academic and nonacademic writing. Academic writing typically includes more factual
evidence with a more defined structure than nonacademic writing. This format can help
readers clearly understand arguments and purposes of the paper, but can be limiting at
times as far as critical thinking and personal judgments. Non-academic pieces have the
freedom to use more relaxed, casual tones that can in turn help readers better relate to
the pieces and form their own opinions. By using language that appeals to the reader,
he or she can draw conclusions from the information that may even help them better
understand than with the defined structure of academic writing. Audiences with radical
views might argue that academic articles are more persuasive because the tone is
formal and there will likely be several hard facts included that they can use as support
for their argument. On the other hand, more liberal and open-minded audiences may
find non-academic writing more persuasive because the appeal to emotion -this kind of
appeal to emotion is called pathos- could play a huge part in the argument (Carroll).
Academic and nonacademic writing differ in many ways and one can observe that the
intended purpose of the article influences the writers moves based on the inclusion of
background information and language used within the articles. The three different
disciplines of psychological, biological, and sociocultural all examine MDMA but
because of the authors chosen moves based on the different intended purposes, the
importance of information varies for the audiences. The authors were able to use moves
involving the inclusion of background information and jargon in order to stay true to that
discipline while all examining different aspects of the same subject.
Works Cited
Hysek, C. M., Y. Schmid, L. D. Simmler, G. Domes, M. Heinrichs, C.
Eisenegger, K. H. Preller, B. B. Quednow, and M. E. Liechti. "MDMA Enhances
Emotional Empathy and Prosocial Behavior." Social Cognitive and Affective
Neuroscience 9.11 (2013): 1645-652. Web. 16 Feb. 2016.
Lowe, Charles, and Pavel Zemliansky. Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing. West
Lafayette, IN: Parlor, 2010. Print.
Lunsford, Andrea A., and John J. Ruszkiewicz. Everything's an Argument. Boston, MA:
Bedford/St. Martins, 2013. Print.
Navarro-Zaragoza, Javier, Clara Ros-Sim, Mara-Victoria Milans, Olga Valverde, and
Mara-Luisa Laorden. "Binge Ethanol and MDMA Combination Exacerbates Toxic
Cardiac Effects by Inducing Cellular Stress." PLOS ONE PLoS ONE 10.10 (2015). Web.
16 Feb. 2016.
"From Gary to Molly: The Feminisation of Ecstasy in Popular Culture | Thump."
Thump RSS. Web. 17 Feb. 2016.
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Expectations
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Analysis
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