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    The document discusses Yvette's experience receiving feedback on her writing. She learned that focusing directly on the main topic rather than including unnecessary side information improved her writing. She also found that providing relevant examples to support her ideas helped strengthen her writing. Additionally, she realized that some parts of her writing did not relate to the central topic. The author learned from Yvette's experience that maintaining a tight focus on the core topic is better than including many extraneous details, though extra writing could be useful for other projects.

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    The document discusses Yvette's experience receiving feedback on her writing. She learned that focusing directly on the main topic rather than including unnecessary side information improved her writing. She also found that providing relevant examples to support her ideas helped strengthen her writing. Additionally, she realized that some parts of her writing did not relate to the central topic. The author learned from Yvette's experience that maintaining a tight focus on the core topic is better than including many extraneous details, though extra writing could be useful for other projects.

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    WP 5

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    The document discusses Yvette's experience receiving feedback on her writing. She learned that focusing directly on the main topic rather than including unnecessary side information improved her writing. She also found that providing relevant examples to support her ideas helped strengthen her writing. Additionally, she realized that some parts of her writing did not relate to the central topic. The author learned from Yvette's experience that maintaining a tight focus on the core topic is better than including many extraneous details, though extra writing could be useful for other projects.

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    Majid Alghanim

    Lynn Raymond
    UWRT 1102 - 008
    #WP5
    I can see how feedbacks gave Yvette great ideas. She learned many things but the most important
    one was when she focused on the topic more than the side information. She also found many
    examples that helped her in improving her writing. She also realized how did she write many
    things for nothing. After reading Yvettes experience, I learned that focusing on the topic is better
    than writing a lot of thing that doesnt have a strong relation to the main idea. However, writing a
    lot may helps in another projects later.

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