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    This document summarizes a student's progress and feedback from various writing assignments in two semesters. It includes the module titles, assignment scores and teacher comments on strengths and weaknesses. The student received scores ranging from 78% to 90% and received feedback on improving use of first person perspective, research introductions, analysis of quotes, grammar, citation integration and relating assignments more personally.

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    This document summarizes a student's progress and feedback from various writing assignments in two semesters. It includes the module titles, assignment scores and teacher comments on strengths and weaknesses. The student received scores ranging from 78% to 90% and received feedback on improving use of first person perspective, research introductions, analysis of quotes, grammar, citation integration and relating assignments more personally.

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    ProgressReflection/Activity1

    ModuleTitleandWriting
    Assignment:

    GradeandTeacher
    Comments

    Strengths

    Weaknesses

    PersonalStatement

    80%
    Not2ndperson

    Personalexperienceis
    validand
    understandlable.

    Speakinmorefirst
    person

    GoodFood/BadFood

    Wedidthisonewiha
    partner,soIdonot
    havethescore.

    Commentaaryand
    strongopinionontopic

    Research
    Introparagraph

    RacialProfiling

    80%
    Notanalysisofquote

    Strongevididencewith
    integration

    Needstronger
    commentary

    IntotheWild

    78

    Validquotes

    Grammarmistakes

    ModuleTitleandWriting
    Assignment:

    BullyingResearchPaper

    90
    Tonsofpassivevoice

    Welldoneresearch

    Quoteandcitation
    integration

    BringaTexttoClass

    Hopefullyabovean
    85%

    Creativitywithtexts
    fromeachquadrant

    Personalrelationtothe
    text

    BraveNewWorld

    88
    Needtointegrate

    Foundgoodevidence. Needbetterintro.
    Commentaryisparallel Weakquoteintegration.
    withquotes.

    FirstSemester

    SecondSemester

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