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    This document contains a student's progress reflections for two semesters including grades and teacher comments on assignments. For the first semester, strengths included introductions, conclusions, and MLA formatting while weaknesses involved pacing, point of view, grammar/punctuation, and using passive voice or lacking evidence, commentary and sentence variety. Assignments covered topics like food, racial profiling and Into the Wild. The second semester included a 94% grade on a bullying research paper, a 99% on bringing a text to class, and a 78% on Brave New World where comments noted issues with topic sentences, conclusions, summarizing the story instead of references.

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    This document contains a student's progress reflections for two semesters including grades and teacher comments on assignments. For the first semester, strengths included introductions, conclusions, and MLA formatting while weaknesses involved pacing, point of view, grammar/punctuation, and using passive voice or lacking evidence, commentary and sentence variety. Assignments covered topics like food, racial profiling and Into the Wild. The second semester included a 94% grade on a bullying research paper, a 99% on bringing a text to class, and a 78% on Brave New World where comments noted issues with topic sentences, conclusions, summarizing the story instead of references.

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    This document contains a student's progress reflections for two semesters including grades and teacher comments on assignments. For the first semester, strengths included introductions, conclusions, and MLA formatting while weaknesses involved pacing, point of view, grammar/punctuation, and using passive voice or lacking evidence, commentary and sentence variety. Assignments covered topics like food, racial profiling and Into the Wild. The second semester included a 94% grade on a bullying research paper, a 99% on bringing a text to class, and a 78% on Brave New World where comments noted issues with topic sentences, conclusions, summarizing the story instead of references.

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    This document contains a student's progress reflections for two semesters including grades and teacher comments on assignments. For the first semester, strengths included introductions, conclusions, and MLA formatting while weaknesses involved pacing, point of view, grammar/punctuation, and using passive voice or lacking evidence, commentary and sentence variety. Assignments covered topics like food, racial profiling and Into the Wild. The second semester included a 94% grade on a bullying research paper, a 99% on bringing a text to class, and a 78% on Brave New World where comments noted issues with topic sentences, conclusions, summarizing the story instead of references.

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    ProgressReflection/Activity1

    ModuleTitleandWriting
    Assignment:
    FirstSemester

    GradeandTeacher
    Comments

    Strengths

    Weaknesses

    PersonalStatement

    80%

    Anecdote
    Introduction
    Thesis
    Conclusion
    MLA
    Organization

    Pacing
    Pointofview
    Grammar/punctuation

    GoodFood/BadFood

    82%

    Introduction
    Thesisstatement
    Evidence
    Conclusion
    MLA
    Workscited

    Commentary
    Fragments

    RacialProfiling

    80%

    Introduction
    Thesisstatement
    MLA
    Workscited

    Passivevoice
    Evidence
    Commentary
    Conclusion

    IntotheWild

    85%

    Introduction
    Thesisstatement
    Conclusion
    MLA
    Workscited

    Passivevoice
    Evidence
    Commentary

    Introduction
    Conclusion
    Thesisstatement
    Evidence
    Commentary
    MLA
    Workscited

    Passivevoice
    Sentencevariety
    Fragments

    ModuleTitleandWriting
    Assignment:
    SecondSemester

    BullyingResearchPaper

    94%

    BringaTexttoClass

    99%

    TableofContents
    Introduction
    Thesis
    Texts
    Audience
    Purpose
    Conclusion
    MLA

    Orderoftexts

    BraveNewWorld

    78%

    Introduction
    Conclusion
    MLA
    Workscited

    TopicSentences
    Concludingsentences
    Toldtoomuchofthe
    story
    Paraphrasedbook
    insteadofTedTalkor
    Article

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