Progress Reflection/Activity 1

Grade and Teacher

Comments

Strengths

Weaknesses

Personal Statement

B-, Margins and alot of

grammer mistakes.
Used alot of was and
were.

The content it self and

idea was strong.

My grammer was not up

to par. I used alot of
past tense that I
shouldnt of.

Good Food/Bad Food

78, Good grammer and

puncation. Needed to
use less style, improve
work cited.

Good grammer and

puncation.

Need to use less style

and improve work cited
page.

Racial Profiling

53, See Me. Work cited

was weak.

Introduction and
conclusion paragraphs
were good.

Everything else was

horrible. Used alot of
Wes and Weres.

Into the Wild

70, Work cited wasnt

done correctly.

Module Title and Writing

Assignment:
First Semester

Module Title and Writing

Assignment:
Second Semester

Bullying Research Paper

65, Work Cited doesnt

match the quotes. No
summaries. -2 for MLA.

Conclusion and
commentary were
strong with no
comments there.

Work cited was horrible

and didnt match my
quotes. Grammer is
improving but still pretty
weak.

Bring a Text to Class

70, 4 Units dont really

get point across

Strong topic and

conclusion paragraphs

4 units arent very

strong and dont get
point across very well at
all.

Brave New World

65, Grammer and

quotes damage.

Conclusion and topic

were strong.

Quotes werent
matching up and I had
the wrong people listed
at the end of the quotes.