Coinless society

1. Introduction
a. Hook
On the April, the Bank of Korea said We will make coinless society until 2020.
b. Connecting information
For example, if you buy 4,900won product, paying 5,000won, you would receive
the rest as mileage or recharged transportation card.
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c. Thesis statement
coinless society is too early to establish coinless society.

2. Body
1) Paragraph 1
Topic sentence : coin may make the economic efficiency weak.
Support1.
it is hard to use the money less than 100won in mileage or transportation card and it is usually
reluctant to pay something with credit card
Support2.
prepaid transportation card not be used for a year is 810 billion 38,000,000 won.

2) Paragraph 2
Topic sentence : it is not enough to protect private information from hacker.
Support1.
For example Sweden
Support2.
For example Card company

3) Paragraph 3
Topic sentence : there are many places or specific part to reluctant to use credit card.
Support1.
Use penetration rate in card terminal.
Support2.
there are people who sell the product which is placed on small truck.
4) Paragraph 4
Topic sentence : It is not good the asymmetry of information.
Support1
The surveillance program of American people
Support2
The US has tapped on president and world leader each country.
5) Paragraph 5
Counterargument
Not only the cost of making coin more expensive than face value of the coins but also usage
of coin gradually is reduced and redemption rate of coin is 20% even though the bank of
Korea makes coin paying 60billion won every year.
Refutation
There is a possibilitie in inflation. Conclusion
6) Conclusion
Restated thesis
There are many benefits of coinless society but negative thing to worry is more than benefits
of coinless society
Opinion
The bank of Korea have to reconsider the plan.