This email from Mark Sedwill forwards two small comments from the Foreign Secretary on a confidential dossier regarding Iraq. The first comment is that paragraph 1 of the executive summary should use the past tense "had to admit" rather than the present tense "has admitted". The second comment is that paragraph 3 of part 1 should include the job titles "Prime Minister and senior Ministers". Sedwill asks if the draft could be shown to Alastair Campbell.
This email from Mark Sedwill forwards two small comments from the Foreign Secretary on a confidential dossier regarding Iraq. The first comment is that paragraph 1 of the executive summary should use the past tense "had to admit" rather than the present tense "has admitted". The second comment is that paragraph 3 of part 1 should include the job titles "Prime Minister and senior Ministers". Sedwill asks if the draft could be shown to Alastair Campbell.
This email from Mark Sedwill forwards two small comments from the Foreign Secretary on a confidential dossier regarding Iraq. The first comment is that paragraph 1 of the executive summary should use the past tense "had to admit" rather than the present tense "has admitted". The second comment is that paragraph 3 of part 1 should include the job titles "Prime Minister and senior Ministers". Sedwill asks if the draft could be shown to Alastair Campbell.
This email from Mark Sedwill forwards two small comments from the Foreign Secretary on a confidential dossier regarding Iraq. The first comment is that paragraph 1 of the executive summary should use the past tense "had to admit" rather than the present tense "has admitted". The second comment is that paragraph 3 of part 1 should include the job titles "Prime Minister and senior Ministers". Sedwill asks if the draft could be shown to Alastair Campbell.
Sent: 18 September 2002 09 51 To : julian mille Cc : Edward Chaplir>"iwWelII1JlrIii0 ; Charles Gray@Ommispimmjel" Ed Owen@OWNJOIlipmomo acampbell@pmm@NPPMMJPMM, john scarlet mrycroft Subject : RE. CONF Dossier 1019 Version - Comments
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The Foreign Sec has two small comments,
* Para 1 of the Executive Summary-should say "Iraq had to admit "
rather than "has admitted" * Para 3 of Par 1 should say " . Prime Minister and senior Ministers
Oateful if he could see the draft going to Alastair Campbell