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PIT Met A Cognitive
AP Literature
Ryan Gallagher
30 December 2010
Poetry Meta-Cognitive
In the poem “Ong Do”, Vu Dinh Lien discusses the deterioration and decay that is inevitable
with prosperity and life. Lien paints the portrait of a calligrapher whose skill was once the epitome of
his success. However, through the passage of time, even the wisest of the wise and the most skillful of
the skilled fell victim to time's blind eye. Although Lien's poem discusses the demise of man in the face
of nature, his poem also doubles to serve as a social commentary on behalf of the Vietnamese people's
resistance to the demise of their own culture in the face of French colonization. In order to parallel the
powerfully political, yet philosophical sentiment expressed in Lien's poem, I focused on maintaining
the simplistic tone of voice and syntactical arrangement, all the while using the aid of insinuating
The title of my poem was more simply titled, “He Who..”, as to more accurately portray the
obscureness of the revered calligrapher, highlighting his insignificance in the protest of time. The
subject of the poem was a calligrapher, indeed, referring back to Thomas De Le's translated title.
However, Lien's original Vietnamese text points to “Ong” as meaning “He”. With such a vague
pronoun, I wished to mirror Lien's intent by not giving the subject of the poem a title, as a title would
suggest some type of 'significance' the subject has- which the subject's significance is de-emphasized in
the poem, and meant to be mere.
The first two stanzas of my poem introduces the subject amidst the beginning of Spring in
which the “petals of cherry blossoms” have just bloomed. I wanted to be exact in the specificity of time
expressed in my translation which is why I chose “Each year” as to relay the continuity of nature in a
cycle. The blooming of the cherry trees signify 'rebirth' and 'renewal'- something nature possesses, but
man does not. The subject in my translation is then given the identity of being the “Wise man”. Reason
I chose “wise man” over the translator's “scholar”, because I thought scholar carried too many western
connotations of being heavily 'educated.' Although that is not to say that being wise does not mean
'being educated', it is just that Vietnamese culture tends to mirror Chinese culture in which the trait of
being 'wise' is highly revered. It is not to be just 'smart', but it is to be also philosophical, which I
thought 'scholar' did not connotate with too effectively. Being 'wise'- Chinese-implications wise, is
more self-imposed and natural, not forced upon by rigorous studying. The wise man in my poem is
depicted carrying with him “black ink” and “China parchment”. Calligraphy has always been a sought
after art form in Asian culture, therefore black ink and China parchment would connect with the work
of the calligrapher. The decision of 'parchment' over 'paper' lends the calligrapher's craft and skill some
prestige. All the Chinese driven cultural symbolism I fused in my poem have a specific duty in which
they exemplify the height of Vietnamese culture (since the Chinese had great influence over the
Vietnamese for years)- pre-colonized by French forces. The calligrapher is the symbol of prosperity
and glory that parallels the era of the Vietnamese, before they fell victim to western encroachment.
Another pair of symbolic couplings I added to the translation were the “Dragons” and
“Phoenixes” that were painted by the calligrapher. In Lien's orginal of the poem, the verbs “mua” and
“bay” are used to animate the two dimensional ink creations of the character.”Mua” indicating 'dance'
and “bay” used to indicate “flight” Since the calligrapher is so highly skilled, such personification of
his medium is used to enrich his talent. The translator decided to not dedicate too much time to
personify the dragons and phoenixes which I thought detracted from the richness of the original poem.
Instead of putting the emphasis on his “accomplished hand” like Le did, I emphasized how the dragons
and phoenixes “took flight” from the “command of his fingers”. It was more important to stress the
'liveliness' of the mystical creatures, because the mystical creatures hold so much cultural significance
in Vietnamese (also Chinese) culture. The animation and life of the dragons and phoenixes determines
and expresses the life and vitality that existed within Vietnamese culture, when they were at their
prime.
However there is a shift in the poem as the calligrapher's prosperity comes to a halt. Contrary to
the author and the translator's portrayal of the decaying significance of the man, I decided to rearrange
my translation's syntactical structure to exemplify the isolation and deterioration of this prosperity.
Lien and Le both continued their line by line sentence structure, while I isolated two stanzas which
indicated the shift of changing times.
But the years increased
And the people dwindled.
The intentional separation of these two stanzas stresses more powerfully the sense of 'loneliness' and
despair that comes with the corroding effects of time. Through this structural decision, the power of
time is given more authority and attention, like how time crept on the calligrapher. Another example of
The separation of action away from subject effectively relays the emphasis of a somber mood that has
substituted the once joyous mood of the poem. In the original poem, Lien gives much attention to the
melancholy vibe of the calligrapher's newly lost recognition. Utilizing words like “sau” and “buon”
which expresses Vietnamese expressions for 'grief' and 'dejection', Lien describes the calligrapher's
instruments of art to signify the beginning of his fall from fame. I paralleled that same mood with
personifying the ink and paper with actions of anguish, as they once symbolized the man's success,