Finally I Chose My Finall

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Finally I chose my finally idea for my surreal story .


It’s about a girl who was never taught to care to she
turns to ice in the forrest I liked this Idear cuz I
though it tied in well with cold hearted ness and I
though bringing that to life would be a very effective
surreal story line. After I wrote up my first rough
story Natasha peer assessed my work giving me
positive feed back. She said she liked the story but
she liked the ending the best because it was very
unexpected leading the reader in to a false sense of
security.
For improvement she said I could improve my
spelling and mabey add more detail in desciption, so
I went back to my work and tried to work from the
feed back I got from Natasher and improve my final
story.

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Surreal music

Mr Halt was our teacher for our research and final pieces on our surreal songs so to get
started her played us some surreal songs of his and we had to write down what we think
made the piece of music surreal.

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