Name: M Needham Title: Rebel

Mood Boards X
Examples of other texts/style models X
Analysis of magazine covers/film openings X
25 word pitch X
Pitch feedback X
Mock ups X
Test shots X
Colour Palette X
Audience profile X

Comment:

General: Looks beautiful, stunning first effort.

Cover: Incredibly stylish, too stylish for a magazine? You’ll really need to find style models from
music to justify your decisions, perhaps use image 3 from ppt to get the eye contact which is a
mainstay of music covers, not sure about the side line merging with the R, you can’t have so
little text, it’s either all or nothing. Face might need lightening as fraction too dark.

Contents: Again smashing, concerned about column width beneath Rickie Lee article, picky I
know but keep News together. Red head picture could be more vibrant as way subtle contrast-
lighten/ redden hair?

DPS: Beautiful again, would it benefit from branding on the page? Excellent choice of images.
Underlining on caption works.

R & P Level: 4b

Practical Draft Level:

4a

2010/2011 LC AS MEDIA