10-23 marks Framing a shot, The guitar is including and excluding featured within elements as appropriate both shots showing appropriate music elements Using a variety of shot Close and mid shots distances as appropriate used throughout Shooting material Guitar featured, appropriate to the task music posters/cds set on DPS relating to chosen genre Selecting mise-en-scene Not a clear 3 colour including colour, figure, palette. Varied but lighting, objects and not clear lighting setting. manipulating Images slightly photographs as edited although appropriate to the black and white context for clashes on contents presentation, including and several images cropping and resizing are too large Accurately using Consistent on language and register double page spread but incorrect spelling and punctuation on cover and contents Appropriately Cover lines and integrating illustration picture overlapped, and text DPS small images integrated with text Showing understanding Contents following of conventions of layout the rule of three- and page design clear sections, DPS laid out well, not too crammed Showing awareness of Little variation on the need for variety in cover and DPS, fonts and text size headings could possibly be larger Using ICT appropriately Text aligned for the task set differently throughout, different colour shades on each page have been used rather than a set palette Music King Magazine